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Shameless said: "co sign smoker keep it up dogg"
smoker420 said: "good work..thats some deep ish"
CHINO said: "agreed. This was a pretty good piece, just flip the structure and make it longer perhaps...other than that all is well..."
Buck said: "Make the structure better.......Easier to read and visualise what you sayin....Other than that it was a nice piece....."
sparky said: "rap supposed to be poetry but supposably it bout hoes and greed, nines go at speed, shoot anotha foe ta bleed, death goes to me, but god shows me g, u only get one life to go wit b, so live to love like u know it b/
so i must survive, tough nights get me para-lyzed, used to live by no fear to die, but seen to much death so i shed tears from eyes, so i let god cure my lies, no more peers dat cry, wanna c heavin so i can switch gears and fly, and say cheers ta da guy/
who gave me a breath, taught me not to do theft, to my life hes da ref, in my right hand used ta carry techs, but now i hold da bible in da left, to mankind he da chef, this man ill fly to after death/"
sparky said: "uppin fo feed"
sparky said: "thx fo da feed....."
OnelistLyricist said: "I feel you on this. Though the whole thing needs an overhaul with structure, and maybe a few seconds spent on yer flow, but other than that, you got a potential hit.
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