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thadangerousdon9 said: "[B][FONT=Trebuchet MS]I've never dropped any poetry before, but this should work out OK because we did poetry in school at one point. This shit is about a girl that I used to be real close with and then some shit happened. Fuck it, here goes:[/FONT][/B]
[CENTER]I Hate You Bitch
We walk down the beach, steppin' in sand
I'm holdin' you, and caressin' your hand
Lettin' each other live forgotten dream
Words burst out, but get lost in the seams
Everything that we share is blatant
It can not be compared or mistaken
Days pass, even while months end
We're always together and fuck friends
You took over most of my thoughts
Finding love, but didn't know we were lost
-I hate you bitch-
The love became strong, and the bond deep
To not think of you, was to not breathe
But all good things must come to an end
We both became, fucked up and bent
The story is something stated in fear
Thoughts and love, created in years
The relationship became a benchmark
Of what we made of a friend's heart
Now, even all of the days are longer
Cuz of the ideas of love that bond firmed
One day I'll see some ghost of us
See love, and I'll know it was
If it happens, when I get up to it
I'll be sayin' "I still love you, bitch."
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[FONT=Trebuchet MS][B]Feedback on that piece please.[/B][/FONT]"
thadangerousdon9 said: "[FONT=Trebuchet MS][B]Thanks man. Let's make sure this doesn't get slept on.[/B][/FONT]"
thadangerousdon9 said: "[QUOTE=U Gon luv Me]nice don.....but what happened to change all of it? i realize some stuff dat goes down in 13 and 14 year olds lives, so i can relate, just whats up? but yeah very deep and nice peice, keep this shit up and ill keep on readin![/QUOTE]
[FONT=Trebuchet MS]To be honest, we changed as people. In less words, we outgrew each other. We didn't go to the same school, so we were always tempted by other people. The shit was always ironic though, cuz we kept on coming back to each other. One day though, I guess we just stopped comin' back though. I'll always wonder what could've been, since she was like my first love, but I've basically moved on. I'll add another verse later. Thanks to 40CALK, Chief Rocka, Sub-Zed, and, U Gon Luv Me. Uppin' again.[/FONT]"
Chief Rocka said: "I Hate You Bitch!!!!!!!.....lmao. Good Shit Don. Pretty Deep...keep'em Comin' Fam...one"
UGLM said: "nice don.....but what happened to change all of it? i realize some stuff dat goes down in 13 and 14 year olds lives, so i can relate, just whats up? but yeah very deep and nice peice, keep this shit up and ill keep on readin!"
UGLM said: "thats deep homie, i feel you...about the whole "what could have been" thing.....yeah been down that road many times....but yeah go ahead and add another one, ill be the first to read...."
Sub-Zed said: "yo dats deep good work"
Melo said: "Lol Don u and UGLM need to stay out the sand box.....yall dont get recess no mo wtf.....lol j/p this drop was tight actually told a story and had a point to it."
δφℓℓαbℓε δсίεηсε said: "You heard Z-ro....I hate you bitch?
I have trouble believin u only 13 sometimes...good shit tho hommie."
