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Why People Dying?????????

Low said: "I saw a kid sittin on the curb lookin upset wonder why his eyes was full of regret Down beside his face the expression showed he was really mad Damn, the bitch has lost his dad. He was like a news reporter With Tears in his eyes. He be sayin "Wuddup Boltamore Another loss of 10 innocent lives" People Stabbing Young Children With Sharp Butcher Knives Gangstas are crazy be killin people For fun A lost father never got to no his own Son. Kids Dead Cops lookin desperatley For Clues. 7 days i be saying comeserations for The upsetting news The world is evil Kids get Shot because of there shoes? Its just like when Hitler taken over Germany He was Racist, Killin all the Jews So if u see like 20 Gangstas When your out RUN They will shoot u nigga there in Dangerous Crews. Like Yesterday I saw a crying Cat Bleeding From its Paw 13 year olds dyin Smokin Takin Drugs Dyin Cos there Braking the Law A kid Comitting suicide Cos he got bullied in School His parents Really wanna Cry A 13 Listened to Afroman "He was Gonna clean his room but then he got high" Kids havin underage sex gettin pregnant there "Fucked up" like Marvin Gaye Mothers Lost There Children Hopin There OK The only thing the can do Is PRAY Feed Back please"

Shameless said: "yo nice shit"

Low said: "[QUOTE=Mr Melody]Yo Lowrider Neva New U Got Into Poetry Lo L Anyway Good Shit[/QUOTE] lol it just from the top of my head thnz shame n melody for feedback. uppin 4 more"

Low said: "[QUOTE=True Essence]you looking at the stereo type of gangsters.. saying there all bad... thats not true.. ignorance but word.. its a good drop.. nothing special.. but yeah its good.. oh and you still a bitch for sayin.. you'd beat me.. and running away hahaha[/QUOTE] Fuck You kid"

Low said: "[QUOTE=LowRider]I saw a sad lil kid sittin on the curb lookin sad i asked him whats rong he told me he lost his dad. Down beside his face the expression showed he was really mad He was like a news reporter With Tears in his eyes. He be sayin "Wuddup Boltamore Another loss of 10 innocent lives" People Stabbing Young Children With Sharp Butcher Knives Gangstas are crazy be killin people For fun A lost father never got to no his own Son. Kids Dead Cops lookin desperatley For Clues. 7 days i be saying comeserations for The upsetting news The world is evil Kids get Shot because of there shoes? Its just like when Hitler taken over Germany He was Racist, Killin all the Jews So if u see like 20 Gangstas When your out RUN They will shoot u nigga there in Dangerous Crews. Like Yesterday I saw a crying Cat Bleeding From its Paw 13 year olds dyin Smokin Takin Drugs Dyin Cos there Braking the Law A kid Comitting suicide Cos he got bullied in School His parents Really wanna Cry A 13 Listened to Afroman "He was Gonna clean his room but then he got high" Kids havin underage sex gettin pregnant there "Fucked up" like Marvin Gaye Mothers Lost There Children Hopin There OK The only thing the can do Is PRAY Feed Back please[/QUOTE] More FeedBack"

Low said: "like da last bar...LOL... ha ha"

Low said: "[QUOTE=Unique][B]I liked it...good story telling..you def. need to keep dropping pieces like this cuz its good too have these types of storytelling in the open mic..good shit low, keep it up[/B][/QUOTE] thanx man, i am trying to elavate still'"

gunit101 said: "nice drop!!"

Low said: "thanx for the feed any more?"

Low said: "[QUOTE=sparky].....its good fo poetry.......but the words are easy rhyming...but u did have good story telling......its just it was avg to me[/QUOTE] thanx :( lol thanx for the feed any more?"

free2jumpoff said: "...realy nice,.i miss readin Real shit here On hip-hop-world,...not rich in Vocab, but good enough to make anybody think about It,..good drop, Overal:8/10,..."

Low said: "Thanx free, Urs Was good with sniper too."

Low said: "anybody else gonna giv me feed."

Low said: "thanx ma boi Mc Blaze."

Low said: "thanx fo da feed n e morr?"

Low said: "[QUOTE=bang bang]that was good low!! u doin better than u normaly do normaly u jus like battle this pussy battle that one but now u changing gettin better fast... and for 12 u might get a good chance to be big IF U ADD EFFORT... PS.ADD ME TO UR LOSSES x2 COZ I BEAT U TWICE ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD[/QUOTE] erm lol ur 12 too bang!"

bgm said: "i think that the poemwas kind of crap i dont know why you were talking about jews and that i thourght that it was very racist"

Emcee Outgoin' said: "way ta cut it up i thought it was good until freedom cut it"

Low said: "[QUOTE=40CAL K]ok great great great someone close this thread. it was nice. but im sick of seeing it[/QUOTE] yeah some one close it, even im sick of seeing it too!!!!!!!! lol"

Unique said: "[B]I liked it...good story telling..you def. need to keep dropping pieces like this cuz its good too have these types of storytelling in the open mic..good shit low, keep it up[/B]"

True Essence said: "you looking at the stereo type of gangsters.. saying there all bad... thats not true.. ignorance but word.. its a good drop.. nothing special.. but yeah its good.. oh and you still a bitch for sayin.. you'd beat me.. and running away hahaha"

True Essence said: "haha kid.. ... what ever.. i said it was a good piece.. and word.. keep trying to elevate.. dont worry man.. EVERYBODY IS TRYING TO elevate.. no bodys perfect.. you still a bitch though"

Sub-Zed said: "yo dat was good keep it up homie"

sparky said: ".....its good fo poetry.......but the words are easy rhyming...but u did have good story telling......its just it was avg to me"

bang bang said: "[QUOTE=LowRider]thanx fo da feed n e morr?[/QUOTE] that was good low!! u doin better than u normaly do normaly u jus like battle this pussy battle that one but now u changing gettin better fast... and for 12 u might get a good chance to be big IF U ADD EFFORT... PS.ADD ME TO UR LOSSES x2 COZ I BEAT U TWICE ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD PS im 13 lol"

δφℓℓαbℓε δсίεηсε said: "ok great great great someone close this thread. it was nice. but im sick of seeing it"

PacMan said: "itz ok.. good story telling"

Mr Melody said: "Yo Lowrider Neva New U Got Into Poetry Lo L Anyway Good Shit"

Haitian Sensation said: "yo lowrider dats some deep shyt /rep."

xfreedomx said: "[QUOTE]I saw a kid sittin on the curb lookin upset wonder why his eyes was full of regret Down beside his face the expression showed he was really mad Damn, the bitch has lost his dad.[/QUOTE] yooo why dis Kid gotta be a bitch?? [QUOTE]He was like a news reporter With Tears in his eyes. He be sayin "Wuddup Boltamore Another loss of 10 innocent lives" People Stabbing Young Children With Sharp Butcher Knives[/QUOTE] yooo can u write something deeper...I mean damn/Dude U sound like doctor suess..and it's clearly evident dat you only used some words bc dey rhyme with the last word of da previous verse.....i.e. eyes/lives/knives... [QUOTE]Gangstas are crazy be killin people For fun A lost father never got to no his own Son. Kids Dead Cops lookin desperatley For Clues.[/QUOTE] aight so u need to stick with 1 topic before u try to interwine anything aiiight, Gangsta killin ppl for fun...aight branch with dat topic...dnt start a new fucking topic and end it before we undastand WTF your talking about... [QUOTE]7 days i be saying comeserations for The upsetting news[/QUOTE] WTF does this mean?? [QUOTE]The world is evil Kids get Shot because of there shoes? Its just like when Hitler taken over Germany He was Racist, Killin all the Jews[/QUOTE] There u go rhyming agn using dumb ass words....yo Try [url]www.m-w.com[/url] plz... And how can you compare an attempted mass genocide with kids being killed for shoes... [QUOTE]So if u see like 20 Gangstas When your out RUN They will shoot u nigga there in Dangerous Crews.[/QUOTE] ........? What???......did I miss something?? [QUOTE]Like Yesterday I saw a crying Cat Bleeding From its Paw[/QUOTE] Next time u see a Cat Cryn take a Picture and Send it to Ripley's Believe it Or Not and wait for ya Check Cuzz Shit Like Dat DON'T HAPPEN...........Let's Use Common Sense Duke Plz [QUOTE]13 year olds dyin Smokin Takin Drugs Dyin Cos there Braking the Law[/QUOTE] Yoooo Duke.....WTF was you tryn to Say...I mean You Sed Dying Twice in the same line.......Not to Mention Smoking/Taking Drugs Can Be Viewed as the Same Fucking thing in this Case.....So Use 1 or the Other... [QUOTE]A kid Comitting suicide Cos he got bullied in School His parents Really wanna Cry[/QUOTE] What Are they Suppose to Do??? Plant Corn..... [QUOTE]A 13 Listened to Afroman "He was Gonna clean his room but then he got high" Kids havin underage sex gettin pregnant there "Fucked up" like Marvin Gaye Mothers Lost There Children Hopin There OK The only thing the can do Is PRAY[/QUOTE] I Don't Understand why your Using Marvin Gaye In this Line.... Oh Sorry I forgot to Add this Drop Iz da Definition of Garbage"

ApOcLyPzE said: "Yo dat shit will make u noticed :) dats gud ;)"

ApOcLyPzE said: "No worriez, homie. :D Itz better dan mine.WAAAAAAAAY beter dan mine. ;)"