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Stacks said: "lmao...good shit don."
CHINO said: "nice piece right here, I didn't read your other one but this one is still good, story is good stop whining though....WuN"
thadangerousdon9 said: "This is the second part of "I Love You, Bitch" although, there not in chronological order. Some people wanted to know the story of why we broke up, so this goes into it a lil' more.
[CENTER]~I love you even today~
Betrayals of trust, were fatal to us
Labeled by lust & made able by fuck
The truth was buried, about screws & marries
The love was abused awarely, & that was the roots of bare bleeds
Our was shrouded in ways, all the while allowed to decay
It stayed routed for graves, despite the smooches we'd take
~I love you, even today~
I started growing as a human, knowin' you were movin'
I noticed the truth 'nd, that what stopped all of my movements
Even when our tale has ended, I'm still frail and unmended
And I know I've told the truth, when the same holds for you
Feedback please.[/CENTER]"
thadangerousdon9 said: "OMFG, she just IMed me. Well, weird shit happens. More feedback, thanks STACKS."
thadangerousdon9 said: "[FONT=Trebuchet MS]Fuck it, I'll give myself feedback then. You know Don, you are the king of the Spit Pit, Open Mic, Audio Arena, and Floetry, but, I think your flow was off on this one, just a little bit, no disrespect intended cuz I sure as hell wouldn't wanna have to battle you, cuz you'd KO anyone in here. I'm ridin' my own dick, just like someone on here I know...lol. More feedback please, I see y'all on.[/FONT]"
thadangerousdon9 said: "[QUOTE=CHINO]nice piece right here, I didn't read your other one but this one is still good, story is good stop whining though....WuN[/QUOTE]
I'm not whining, I'm bitching. On the real, thanks y'all for the feedback. I think the piece is kind of invalid now, but whatever more feedback, this might become the most replied to piece in Floetry."
Chief Rocka said: "co-sign melo and chino on this....nice shit don..one"
Melo said: "Good shit Don....i liked the structure of the bars, and the flow was on point, also the topic was good."
