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Low said: "[QUOTE=Appolo]the HUSTLAS wat ??? i make these [B]dudes ruddle(blush)[/B]they couldnt shock me if i waz connected to 2000 volts [B]barefooted ina puddle [/B] Go Yell May Day yo about to [B]encounter trouble[/B] you might see yo last day on earth so [B]cuddle up and snuggle [/B] YOU said we waz average wit yo wig splitted yo gonna know [B]tha meanin of heavy damage[/B] pure animosity mixted wit [B]str8 savage [/B] they gon have to wrap yo ass in [B]mummy bandage [/B] ill diminish you into [B]microscoptic fragments [/B] no casket jus yo body ina [B]small package [/B] even if he refuses my words will get in his head and [B]render his mind useless[/B] U beta go pray to tha lord that you wont [B]wake up ina morgue [/B] cuz ill creep into yo room at night and strangle you wit [B]yo umbilical cord [/B] its devastatin tha impact i cause ill soon become [B]ure mid life crisis [/B] ill have you typin in pain bones stiffinin up like an [B]old man wit arthritis[/B] this is unprecedented tha verse that will get [B]yo skull dented [/B] acouple shots of [B]UNDER~DOGGZ in tha ass is highly recomended [/B] ill have you feelin all sorts of sensations like when a [B]bitch rubs her clit [/B] my sharp skills will get yo [B]wrist slit [/B] when you piss [B]you need to sit[/B] no need fo gun play jus a laxative to empty [B]these dudes full of shit [/B] even if by race we relate doesnt mean i wont [B]behead you at a fast rate [/B] wit rage retaliate to [B]tha constent hate[/B] but its too late ive decided yo fate watch how your [B]life span rapidly detiriorates[/B] fo tha dude who has a dollar in his sig when [B]you speak be discreet [/B] cuz at night you might face a demon that will [B]drag you by yo feet[/B] ill take you to tha [B]depths of hell [/B] feel tha [B]inferno heat [/B] that will [B]melt yo clique [/B] proclamin to be tha best i will [B]take yo soul and lay yo ass to rest [/B] and im makin it clear im a [B]man wit no fear [/B] by myself ill a bring tha bloodshed that will be [B]makin you cry a DOGGZ tear [/B] THA [B]MOTIVATED BUSTAS[/B] gettin hit [B]wit a lethal dose [/B] so venomous theres [B]no vaccine fo my foes [/B] yo heart rate slows as tha [B]poisin to yo brain flows [/B] tha sudden rush [B]make you shit yo clothes [/B] WHEN YOU READ THIS YOU KNOW WHO YOU ARE I DONT TAKE A BACK SEAT TO NOBODY IF YOU THA BEST PUT IT TO THA TEST I MIGHT BE WID MA CREW BUT INDIVIDUALY WE ENOUGH TO TAKE CARE OF ALL OF YOU GIVE ME YA BEST SHOT IM COCKED AND LOADED TO SHOOT SOME MORE ROUNDS GET AT ME IM READY FOR WAT EVA AND DONT FUCKIN RUN AND HIDE OR TRY TO SAY YOUVE SQUASHED THE BEEF YOU MADE IT NOW LIVE WITH IT[/QUOTE] Nice Piece Keep It Goin!!!"

QBZ-2 said: "Motivated WHOOOOOOOOO kILLED THAT SHIT AP. UNDER DOGZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ"

Freestyle Champ Tec said: "Nice shit Appollo man keep it goin you here i am not down with them any more just krucial and his wack friends holla or should i say krucial and his dickridin Biters LOL"

Freestyle Champ Tec said: "man i ain't got beef with underdogz that is all Krucila shit so underdogz we cool holla at ya boi"

Sporadic said: "gd shit dawg, keep it up m nxt 2 diss them lol check out me spent lungs apollo and bang bang diss 2 those niggaz"

condemned said: "yo freestyle champ u welcome to join the homicidals"

spent lungs said: "nice shit bro maybe sort out the structure of the verse a little bit more cos its quite hard to read but you got a lot of good shit in there stay up 1"

Unique said: "[B]Overall i was a good piece i liked it...keep doing ur shit apollo... you ef. got sme hot shit...[/B]"

sledge said: "a good dis..as peeps have said work on the structure etc, keep doin ya thing. props pce"

ghettofabb said: "hey im confused in hurrr, is MH breakin up coz i donno what's goin on..anyone? tec, whats the new crew called?"

bang bang said: "yo man nice shit u really kool when u in beef lol they gettin flatted by this shit like spent said -structure-flow- nice punches tho shits harsh"

Prophecy said: "Thats was just overall great shit... I look forward to reading more, and maybe throwing some shit like this down on audio... Niice work 8.9/10"

Young Gunna said: "thats kool freestyle champ..anywayz under-dawg for life!!!! yeah appolo u ripped it..."

OB said: "the HUSTLAS wat ??? i make these [B]dudes ruddle(blush)[/B] they couldnt shock me if i waz connected to 2000 volts [B]barefooted ina puddle [/B] Go Yell May Day yo about to [B]encounter trouble[/B] you might see yo last day on earth so [B]cuddle up and snuggle [/B] YOU said we waz average wit yo wig splitted yo gonna know [B]tha meanin of heavy damage[/B] pure animosity mixted wit [B]str8 savage [/B] they gon have to wrap yo ass in [B]mummy bandage [/B] ill diminish you into [B]microscoptic fragments [/B] no casket jus yo body ina [B]small package [/B] even if he refuses my words will get in his head and [B]render his mind useless[/B] U beta go pray to tha lord that you wont [B]wake up ina morgue [/B] cuz ill creep into yo room at night and strangle you wit [B]yo umbilical cord [/B] its devastatin tha impact i cause ill soon become [B]ure mid life crisis [/B] ill have you typin in pain bones stiffinin up like an [B]old man wit arthritis[/B] this is unprecedented tha verse that will get [B]yo skull dented [/B] acouple shots of [B]UNDER~DOGGZ in tha ass is highly recomended [/B] ill have you feelin all sorts of sensations like when a [B]bitch rubs her clit [/B] my sharp skills will get yo [B]wrist slit [/B] when you piss [B]you need to sit[/B] no need fo gun play jus a laxative to empty [B]these dudes full of shit [/B] even if by race we relate doesnt mean i wont [B]behead you at a fast rate [/B] wit rage retaliate to [B]tha constent hate[/B] but its too late ive decided yo fate watch how your [B]life span rapidly detiriorates[/B] fo tha dude who has a dollar in his sig when [B]you speak be discreet [/B] cuz at night you might face a demon that will [B]drag you by yo feet[/B] ill take you to tha [B]depths of hell [/B] feel tha [B]inferno heat [/B] that will [B]melt yo clique [/B] proclamin to be tha best i will [B]take yo soul and lay yo ass to rest [/B] and im makin it clear im a [B]man wit no fear [/B] by myself ill a bring tha bloodshed that will be [B]makin you cry a DOGGZ tear [/B] THA [B]MOTIVATED BUSTAS[/B] gettin hit [B]wit a lethal dose [/B] so venomous theres [B]no vaccine fo my foes [/B] yo heart rate slows as tha [B]poisin to yo brain flows [/B] tha sudden rush [B]make you shit yo clothes [/B] WHEN YOU READ THIS YOU KNOW WHO YOU ARE I DONT TAKE A BACK SEAT TO NOBODY IF YOU THA BEST PUT IT TO THA TEST I MIGHT BE WID MA CREW BUT INDIVIDUALY WE ENOUGH TO TAKE CARE OF ALL OF YOU GIVE ME YA BEST SHOT IM COCKED AND LOADED TO SHOOT SOME MORE ROUNDS GET AT ME IM READY FOR WAT EVA AND DONT FUCKIN RUN AND HIDE OR TRY TO SAY YOUVE SQUASHED THE BEEF YOU MADE IT NOW LIVE WITH IT"

OB said: "thanx for the feedback man ill try and sort out ma structure thanx for the feedback @spent, qbz and lowrider"

OB said: "aight ive edited ma structure...but dunno whever its any easier to read keep that feedback comin thanx@ma bois bang bang and don prodigy fo the feedback"

xxSpiTTen_TrUtHxx said: "good shit holdin it down for the fam kidd... big upps on ya piece keep doin ya thang.."