Hey! Beat maker...pssstttt....
If you're looking to make it in the music industry as a rapper, a hip
hop artist or a music producer, you're going to need to have some
beats.
Luckily for you, you don't have to set up a whole recording studio to
make the beats that will make you famous. Now there's a simple online
solution to your beat making needs with millions of ways to compose your
music.
Click here to get
started in the lucrative and enjoyable music business.
Home >>
Hip Hop Forums >>
A Scorned ChildA Scorned Child
Low said: "thats deep fam short-N-Sweet. i like it."
Hazazel said: "Its Kinda Dark but thats more my style tell me what you think:
Standing here i ask myself what happened to your plan
to raise me to understand
what it means to be a man
and provide for my fam
but you destroyed my fragile young mind with a swing of your hand
now everyone talks about this day in age
how we should mind our own business
HOW
when im so full of rage
my mind is like an animal fighting to get out of his cage
this is one time i wont just turn my cheek
i refuse to close my mouth and not speak
As i approach the tears fall as i see my mother laying there lifeless
dad please i beg you let mom be
I can smell the budweiser fresh on your breath
but to me it smells like the cold hearted man of death
you turn and face me now bringing your constant barrage of blows in my direction
as my mother slowly wakes she sees the beating im taking
she runs to my side with her hands still shaking
she succeeds and his attention is brought to her
while i look through bloodstained eyes at a blur
ive made the decision this is the last time
someone will be hurt from your bloodline
i run out of the room in a daze to find a weapon
i remember in the basement my dad keeps his smith & wesson
now i ask myself the question
CAN I GO THROUGH WITH THIS?
because if i dont i will surely die from my fathers fist
then i hear a loud HELP ME SOMEONE yell
thats it my mind shuts off and my rage starts to swell
i grab the gun and return to the room
as my mind yells [B]faster [/B] or she will surely die soon
As i hold the gun up i think of that happy bride and groom
the hammer cocks back as my mind consumes what im about to do
I whisper to my self Goodbye dad & I love you
and with that i fire that fatal shot
the one that would finally make the pain stop
now i have to be a witness and explain to the cop
why it was i had to shoot my own pop
kinda basic but this one is more for the emotion behind it then the complexity"
Hazazel said: "lol thanks sandman for the feed yea i dont really do poetry to much myself but i figured why not"
Hazazel said: "@ spitten-thanks bro yea i got one more im gnona post later but im more of a dark kinda poetry its weird...yo ima hit u up on the pm to either do a callabo poem or open mic piece and we should get PNC in it to
@low-thanks little homie..im tryin to expand my mind and shit so i can be a better hip hop artist"
Hazazel said: "@ Ely-thanks for the feed i appreciate it"
Hazazel said: "nah revelation you deff can be down"
phyphe said: "as far as the piece..the truth shall set ya mind free, feelin pain through that peice, very harsh things on society..good drop
as far as the poetry collab..i'd b nice to hop on it wit yall, if u got it down already its all good...just make it real
stay ups on the poetry"
δφℓℓαbℓε δсίεηсε said: "Pop A Cap!
Normally I dont get over to the poetry section.
Kept me entertained. Short N Sweet, Easy to read."
xxSpiTTen_TrUtHxx said: "thas a deep subject fam.. i think u covered it well tho...lots of good visual descriptions and everything.... if u ever need help wi tya poetry hit me up homie...or PnC he nice as hell in the poetry... but ayy nigga u alwasy drop good and for the firs time i've seen u in the floetry forum was not bad at all.... be easy..."
xxSpiTTen_TrUtHxx said: "yeah the 3 of us will get down on sumtin..."
Ely said: "now "someone" is gonna say i'm beeing a d/r but that was really good
lot of emotion"
