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Deadly Purifications

UZI said: "damn thats tight fa'real, liked the kind of weather relation @ the start, I c what u mean about not worrying about it rhyming mos def. a deep peice"

Crisis said: "i like it...we have contrasting styles...u have more of a constant structure with ur poems and im more lyric poem..like Langston Hughes cuz thats what my moms had me reading growin up lol....def a nice piece...i like the imagery and the entire metaphorical sense of the poem...keep it comin"

Hazazel said: "ok deff one of your better pieces overall....... the imagery was very good and i like how it almost had an internal conflict as if this was someone who knows what will happen if they do the drug but is deciding weather or not to do it anyway plus i like the fact that it relates to the weather because it shows how not only does it effect you but the whole world is affected so that image portrayed through the weather was great... all in all i like this piece it was more of a things that make you go hmmmmmmm type of piece and i have always liked those because your imagination can run with it....... keep doin ya thing"

Palmer said: "man some deep shit there, not really huge fan of poems like this but a good image was put into my mine and had some great idea in there wiv good content, if u made something like this as an open mic piece i would have probaly felt it more but was shit good shit! ill look out for more of ya stuff... peace!"

phyphe said: "[RIGHT]"inspired by 20/20's thread "figure it out"*[/RIGHT] [LEFT]floetry keystyle[/LEFT] [CENTER][COLOR=Navy]so active is the process of thought confined to our thickened umbrella which casts the rain into the abiss of solitude locked in our ever mourning yet our windows open to such a windy gust of new horizons so dark unpurifying liquids and soliditations replace our umbrellas with needles needles not as sharp as our minds shall tell us through timberless rain for every fire driven insight gives more greivence to that of comfort humans indicted with the pain mother nature herself let us hold, palmfaced in which now fate lies in our hands..covered with the lies spoken by man our creations of these substantial everlasting death gobbstoppers, shall reign to those of pain and misery to drive them further..ever more yet never torn into such pleasurable senses by only god given seeds... but most plant the fruit of the serpent in their window.so the world may taste it the children..ghetto like..and the goodies in the safe homes arent safe for the parents of flesh have yet to coincide with these bannings kids finding pleasure in smoke filled carcuses waiting to begin digging their own shovel is casted into their hands from a single green liten torch pollution of skies make it hard to look up as we look forward to this future.. of so bright..never ending lastfullness of our own self-wothlessness to come for we must beg eachother to outlaw these obseneties..with pride for those of you who agree..i can see through your thick skinless mortality for we all know substantially in which we have inflicted upon ourselves so before hypocritical statements cant be withdrawled..think......... about life..first...before the drug slips into our judgement day[/COLOR] this whole peice....(f u didnt grab the meaning)....is about drugs and its effects on life if you did not get it...please read it again and leave your thoughts...very and highly appreciated[/CENTER]"

phyphe said: "appreciate the feed from ya'll 3 no doubt..... this poetry is supposed to be my ride into college...but i dunno feed is very much appreciated"

phyphe said: "thanks fam bump"

phyphe said: "^^thanks family bump"

Jkacee said: "Good shit man! But I'm actually the guy that wrote "Figure it out" I was accidently under my brothers name when I did it... but anyway... I like the flow man it felt sort of like you was speaking to me. Like in a deep preacher sense...nice PEACE"