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Crisis said: "wrote this in high school so its a good 4 or 5 years old lol...i found this book and its the only one i could actually read...i had chickenscratch writing in high school lol...this is what i did 5 outta 6 periods a day and i still got into USC/UCLA niggaz lol [SIZE=3] [FONT=Arial Narrow]To her....... Im neither black nor white nor brown nor yellow nor fat nor slim nor tall nor short nor intelligent nor remedial nor crip nor blood nor male nor female nor God nor man To her....I'm nothing [/FONT] [/SIZE]"

Emcee Outgoin' said: "i aint that in to poetry but i liked it it has symbolism/ a catch or wateva i aint into poetry but i liked it"

Crisis said: "free verse...it has a rhythm but no rhyme..."

Crisis said: "[QUOTE=Jaybsty]aight coo coo, nice piece... :D[/QUOTE] too bad since its in this section ima get no feed haha"

Crisis said: "thanks for the feed homie...uppin"

Crisis said: "thanks for the feed...uppin"

Crisis said: "props fam....uppin"

Crisis said: "thanks fam...uppin"

Crisis said: "props on the feed yall....uppin"

Na$tiNoiZe said: "i like that i do a lil poetry every now and then and i liked that on th real homie"

Crisis said: "props for the feed...uppin"

C_aBoVe_AvErAgE said: "some nice stuff man... short... but u still got ur message across... keep it up"

Crisis said: "bump..........."

Low said: "[B]i liked it because it was diffrent. good shit.[/B]"

UZI said: "[QUOTE=Low][B]i liked it because it was diffrent. good shit.[/B][/QUOTE] Yeh truly poetical,relli nice I was feeling it,very deep"

Jaybsty said: "aight I aint no poetry buff, so what do you call a piece like this, cause this aint no roses are red violets are blue...lol I understand the message that it's sorta about neglection & to her you are nothing, but what sorta poetry do you call this?"

Jaybsty said: "aight coo coo, nice piece... :D"

UGLM said: "[b]im all high and you got me thinking of some good shit, crisis...nice shit...[/b]"

Buck said: "[I]Ye Liked The Ending Message....Like How Your Expressing Your Heart Ache :D [/I]"

phyphe said: "nice and short and simple...sometimes a hard thing to do... good shit gettin a message out in such few words"

Melo said: "[B]This was tight...actually had a meaning and not a slur of words. Very symbolic...good shit Crisis.[/B]"

Julius C said: "last line made it complete..... not bad bro, i stumbled across an old rhyme/poetry book of my own a few weeks ago, interesting checkin out shit u used 2 write huh... anyways pretty good fam"

xxSpiTTen_TrUtHxx said: "hey homie shit was short sweet n to the point... u dropped sum meaningful shti in under 50 words which is a challenge in itself... its always tite to find old shit and see how your style used to be versus how it is now.... good drop fam... but TO ME.... YOU'RE STILL NUTHIN!!!! jus playin...easy"

Ely said: "i think it's cool that u posted some u did way back a short n simple poem n u dont have to talk about it couse it's all right there, anyone who reads it understands it. Keep up d good work"

Dark Soliloquy said: "yo...piece was deep crisis i like it. good shit."

TCA said: "that is a nice shit....overall 10/10..... :cool:"

Tha FireMayne said: "sikk shit homie..i got much respect for u..keep it coming.."
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