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...|| The Voices ||......|| The Voices ||...
CHINO said: "[left][b][color=black]...||The Voices||...[/color][/b]
[b][color=black]I hear them when I sleep, convincing me to do harm to others...
I try to avoid them in my dreams, but they stay close...
whispering in my ear sinister plots most men would never imagine...
as if the devil was lying next to me speaking his mind clearly...
I suddenly envision bodies mangled and mutilate beyond recognition...
limbs tangled n twisted like knots in a shoe lace unfixable...
faces of evil with blackened eye balls and teeth that are razor sharp...
they speak to me...[/color][/b]
[b][color=black]they tell me things no one should ever hear for if they did they would parish...
simply synical and twisted leaving my mind numb I cannot fear for I am amused...
but why me? why do they speak to me, am the chosen pawn in the game of chess...
nothing more than a piece in a game to be controlled by the demons of hell?...
I've seen hades on more than a few occasions but I wasn't scared I was aroused...
they speak to me...[/color][/b]
[b][color=black]attracted to the screams of innonce being tortured and corrupted beyond repair...
the wings of angels hung on the wall while they were still lying on the gravel...
backs bleeding from the spot where their wings were brutally ripped off...
I can see their faces clearly, eyes full of tears as they are over come by hatred...
if you push the good too far evil will over come them in thoughts of retaliation...
to do that unto the man which he has done unto you, forgetting of gods commandments...
they speak to me...[/color][/b]
[b][color=black]I awaken from my dream to realize it was more than a dream, but reality itself...
we are the angels and we are the demons, we battle amongst each other willingly...
subconciously knowing all the while that no matter what might happen we rule us...
not like kings and queens, but the respect or lack there of for our fellow man...
do unto others as you would have them do unto you, I remember that from my youth...
still I continue to hear the voices and see the faces of tortured souls in my dreams and...
they speak to me...[/color][/b]
[/left]"
CHINO said: "Good look on the feed Folk, appreciate that shit fa real."
sledge said: "this was a real good piece....long , but good, very err..damn word has jus gone outta my head...ye..vivid. Liked it. Shouldnt be slept on.
pce"
Chief Rocka said: "SIKKK....JUST PLAIN SIKK
i was feelin' this verse:
[quote=Иэмэѕіѕ][B]attracted to the screams of innonce being tortured and corrupted beyond repair...
the wings of angels hung on the wall while they were still lying on the gravel...
backs bleeding from the spot where their wings were brutally ripped off...
I can see their faces clearly, eyes full of tears as they are over come by hatred...
if you push the good too far evil will over come them in thoughts of retaliation...
to do that unto the man which he has done unto you, forgetting of gods commandments...
they speak to me...[/B][/quote]"
Buck said: "[I]Left Feed In The Open Mic Version....Feed Ho![/I]"
TheTruth said: "this shit was hot very deep nice imagery hot metaphors
this is worth the read trust me"
xxSpiTTen_TrUtHxx said: "this piece is not a MATRESS.. why this shit gettin SLEPT ON?? good shit... it was very vivid as sledge said... good metaphors and all your aspects of this type of writing were on point... easy"
PoETiCMa said: "Whoa lol morbid... but the imagery was interesting..."
