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Holla so I can "prove my self"...Holla so I can "prove my self"...
neva eva give said: "humble got it for me 2...but he got it w/ his last line..no dr pepper im sippin henn 2nite....that was good"
Panama said: "Pretty close, i liked both rhymes. Since only one person gets the vote, Ill give it to Dr. Pepper. Heart your shit was tight, I think Peppers just flowed together better. The punchlines were equal. The flow on peppers was better though.
Dr. Pepper = Vote."
Rydin2low said: "humble got that shit fa sho. no doubt."
lyricalexpert said: "Humble hands down and I aint gonna give a reason it was just better"
madskillz said: "[QUOTE=Dr Pepper]I forgot to set up so guidelines, so peep this.
Spit once, no more that 12 lines, first to 3 votes.
Ok, look:
Yeah kid, I suggest you keep your heart humble/
Before I have ya body swinging from a tree like you live in the jungle/
You said it yourself in my last battle, "he ain't nuttin to fuck with"/
I'll stay away from the gun clips, and just stick a knife in ya stomach/
Haha, dumb bitch, you so low, you swing a blade and be cuttin the rug/
I'll put my dick in ya mouth and having you talking in tounges/
I never heard you spit before, but I hope you aight/
Cause hell, even Nas knew when to backdown from a fight/
So if you value ya life, kid don't be retarded/
Cause all you talking is shit, its like ya mouth is farting/
Haha, this battle was a Homer, like the father of Bart/
Watch ya whole body crumbe when I rip out ya Humble Heart/
Easy! Scream at me son[/QUOTE]
hey pepper this is good critizism right here so dont take it the wrong way dog but u'r first line would of been the shit if yuo would have said.........
......Yeah kid, I suggest you keep your heart humble/
Before I have ya body swinging from a tree like you [B]jorge of da [/B] jungle/
....i'm i right? the rest of u'r shit was hmmm....ok i guess keep working on it work on u'r deliverance and check out how some of the best in here post there lyrics i suggest u look at the style and deliverance of CHINO, cleveland king, medulla, killerpoet1, crisis and talk boss dem cats spit ill shit with great deliverance."
Murraculous Revelation said: "ya its ur signature, u gotta do it urself"
Dr Pepper said: "Yo, you trying to battle, check in. You can spit soon as you check in, or I can go first, just let me know.
Holla"
Dr Pepper said: "I forgot to set up so guidelines, so peep this.
Spit once, no more that 12 lines, first to 3 votes.
Ok, look:
Yeah kid, I suggest you keep your heart humble/
Before I have ya body swinging from a tree like you live in the jungle/
You said it yourself in my last battle, "he ain't nuttin to fuck with"/
I'll stay away from the gun clips, and just stick a knife in ya stomach/
Haha, dumb bitch, you so low, you swing a blade and be cuttin the rug/
I'll put my dick in ya mouth and having you talking in tounges/
I never heard you spit before, but I hope you aight/
Cause hell, even Nas knew when to backdown from a fight/
So if you value ya life, kid don't be retarded/
Cause all you talking is shit, its like ya mouth is farting/
Haha, this battle was a Homer, like the father of Bart/
Watch ya whole body crumbe when I rip out ya Humble Heart/
Easy! Scream at me son"
Dr Pepper said: "Thanks for the advice, i'll check it out.
By the way, [url]http://www.hip-hop-world.com/showthread.php?t=1712&page=1&pp=10[/url]
Vote on that for me."
Dr Pepper said: "Haha, I like that. You may have gotten this one, but we'll see. Uppin for votes!"
Dr Pepper said: "Aight, good battle Humble. Ya know, after what you said in my other battle, I kinda under estimated you and didn't come at you as hard as the other kid. We'll have a rematch around this weekend if ya want :D
BROOK!"
Fame_G-Unit said: "yo you first dawg and ill follow
~fame~"
Humble Heart said: "[QUOTE=Dr Pepper]Yo, you trying to battle, check in. You can spit soon as you check in, or I can go first, just let me know.
Holla[/QUOTE]
i'm in......................."
Humble Heart said: "Ok Doc, you's a loser, Tryna spit against the kid with the most
How you aint got 2 wins yet? but got 35 posts?
That cause you keep trying, but always get ya shit ripped out
Be original, lose those recycled lines that ya mouth spit out
You da one in the gay bars, pants saggin, dick all out
This is my cash cow, I'm gonna make you sick till you pass out
Make you put ya lips on ur boyfriends ass and suck his gas out
Or til his mouth catches gout, This'll be ya last bout
And yeah I gave you props, so go ahead and take it the head
you'll need it when I'm ripping you to shreds with lyrical pegs
And now I'm snatching ya label off, Humble's supreme in any fight
So yeah...Fuck Dr Pepper, I'm sipping Henny tonight
Who want it
Let's get some VOTES!!!"
Humble Heart said: "[QUOTE=Dr Pepper]Haha, I like that. You may have gotten this one, but we'll see. Uppin for votes![/QUOTE]
Much Luv
Dang...where everyone at!!!"
Humble Heart said: "Ok...
2 for me
1 for Pepper...
Somebody come on and help us finish this off!!!!"
Humble Heart said: "[QUOTE=lyricalexpert]Humble hands down and I aint gonna give a reason it was just better[/QUOTE]
OK, that's my first battle, first win. Good.
Much luv Pepper
Anyway, How does the win loss thing come up under my name..I gotta do it?"
Humble Heart said: "OH, you killed that dude in the other battle.
We'll find a time when we both on....
much luv"
