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Some Spoken Word, but written down...Some Spoken Word, but written down...
WyzeWordz said: "I extend my sentiment throught the led in my pencil tip as the pencil grips the once desolate page now filled with a poets penmanship
I've created a safe haven between the blue lines thats seem to have been placed on paper for the soul purpose of providing me a way of escape from day to day tribulations
my soul once a baked raisin is now rehydrated by my creative drive to strive for greatness
i try to be a great man and great men dont jump over the top of their obstacles but they run right through and topple thier obstacles
but thats hard to do when constantly my eyes are on the move cuz theres alwayz someone tryna stop you right outside your optic view
so what i do is keep countin my blessins so i wont drown in my stresses so when a thousand pounds of this pressure be on my shoulders i use it to strengthen me
so even tho my enemies wanna see me in a state of stagnation i'ma keep racin until i see thier whit flags wavin
and use my words as razor blades to penetrate thier deepest mental state
so selah, aka meditate on what i say
thats it.. a lil hard to follow, but thats what makes spoken word unique, it would sound ten times better if i were to speak it but thats it for now... some feed back plz"
PoETiCMa said: "Couple of spelling errors but thats not important. Your right, this is good as a spoken word piece I can hear it as if u were reciting it. Spoken word is never quite the same when someones reading it cause only the author themselves knows the exact flow. So yeah, the concept is good my only opinion would be to get a little bit deeper id like to see you lengthen the piece n share more of your thoughts."
