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fellow newbies.....fellow newbies.....
neva eva give said: "yo ill go...but imma be gettin off 2nite round 10ish...so if u ain't back yet ill spit cuz i gots skool tamorrow"
neva eva give said: "I ain’t gotta use copy c to be a thug ass g/
Neva eva use a floppy D, im jus me/
U need a makeover with Grease like Sandra D/
Cuz I heard some shit n it been writtin/
Cuz this fellow newbie shit u be spittin/
Be kinda whack, got ya mouth shittin/
Cuz wat u were sayin was jus like betrayin/
Weak, u should be on an excersise bike insteada slayin/
Am I rite, thought so, and yeah im white/
And ill destroy u when the sun up or when it nite/
Fire fo feet in front witta fo five or if u outta site/
Cuz u gonna be bleedin blood,n fallin witta thud/
N after this battle only thing u gonna need is a miraculous recovery/
Or the doctors come up with a miraculous discovery/"
neva eva give said: "damn...nice job..i thought i had a good one for me at least.."
Panama said: "Revelation got this one."
mic_rapest said: "M-rev......got It......mix, You Got To Come Harder....
VOTE-M-REV"
lyricalexpert said: "Revelation hands down
Neva eva give your shit is weak dawg I've seen better from you
Keep it up tho"
Murraculous Revelation said: "havent battled in a lil bit, looking for one, posting this now so someone has plenty of time to reply, im going to work, i will see who accepted when i get back then figure it out, dont post ur shit yet. we will post at the same time.
12-15 lines
first to 3 votes
no crew votes"
Murraculous Revelation said: "u gon' regret this neva-eva-'give'/
please 'forgive', cuz when im done u aint neva-eva-gonna-'live'/
left with blood leakin out ya body like a 'sive'/
and just excuse my late post i had a "distraction"/
cuz when i take affirmative "action", my knife divide u like a "fraction"/
my 12 guage pump "action" will leave u in "traction"/
and to my "satisfaction", my lyrics burn u like an allergic "reaction"/
and whats this about u saying that ur 'white'?/
so am i, doesnt mean i aint going farther then an international 'flight'/
so im coming to a close and on the mic im "ferocious"/
ur lyrics "atrocious", and u must 'trust', that im gon' 'buss'/
and much to ur 'disgust', ur loss list u gon' have to 'adjust'/"
Murraculous Revelation said: "vote up ppl"
Murraculous Revelation said: "votes votes votes"
Murraculous Revelation said: "come on ppl 38 views and not one vote? whats with that?"
Murraculous Revelation said: "2-0. 1 more for a KO"
Murraculous Revelation said: "thats it KO 3-0, good battle man."
Murraculous Revelation said: "keep workin on it man, practice makes perfect, stay up. peace"
