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l3ig_C said: "I glance out my window, see a canadian flag in the wind blow/ attached to a white pole, paint's peeling right off it all/ it's old, unmaintained, the country symbol's tattered/ I can't explain, but doesn't it matter? at the same time a lightning bolt shatters/ the breeze picks up, leaves are kicked up/ our skies blacken, influence my rappin'/ rain fall's in no particular pattern, random at then/ I feel like I should go for a walk without the cloak/ who care's if I get soaked, I'm already colder than most/ with no intentions, did I mention my skills are endless?/ you versus my style?, I'll fucking crush yo' defences/ I bring from within the intense detail/ sting with venom like a black widow female/ a dangerous agent, you can't even begin to gauge my intent/ the house bangs from the Pioneer system, inpiring wisdom/ I let go, cause it felt wrong, now I can move on/ without a haze clouding my songs, remain versatile and strong/ you think for a second, you got it locked/ I'll destroy you without question, with my rhyme weapons cocked/ mentally disturbed, I picture myself in a graveyard outside the suburbs/ walking slowly at midnight, under a full moon's light/ minus the fright, a thousand rows of stone to my right/ yet it's peaceful, amongst the mass resting place/ after daylight I sleep well, knowing it's gonna be over some day/ ignite a match, and light a flaming staff/ torch a pile of cash, that makes the planet last/ smoke a pipe with hash, and start down to the crypt/ head full of wonder and mischief, take another hit/ on the way, torches are lit, forces of darkness are swift/ descend a spiral stair way, built by the ancients I'd say/ water drips from the ceiling, a gust of wind gives me the strangest feeling/ I can't believe what I'm seeing, it's got me reeling/ stacks of bones, from times long past and kings who lost their thrones/ coffins exposed, and treasures of grandure from across the globe/ then I awake suddenly, to find I never even left my home."

PoETiCMa said: "This is more a lyrical piece then anything it didnt have a poetic feel but the vocab, imagery, and flow was pretty decent. Coo piece. Keep writin Keep elevatin~ Poeticma"