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neva eva give said: "i still need practice...lookin for a battle
1 verse...ehh 5-7 barz, first to 3 votes"
neva eva give said: "febuary 24, da bitch got on dis earth/
lemme show u wat this verse worth/
ill just spit off till ya next baby birth/
nevamind ya semen all gone from u jackin/
come by these girls like tremorS tryna mack em/
but u should keep diggin cuz ya gettin no where/
n u ain't on a joint, u just breathin in mo air/
but now i gotta blunt, n ur like come on share/
haha u make me laugh imma make the earth tremble/
cuz my flow is asthmatic, n my 22 automatic/
gonna blow u ta static, n imma true diplomatic/
but when i bust-a-nut i got the girls in a bunch/
but at lunch when u bust-ya-nut ya just hear "crunch"/"
neva eva give said: "wait u thought my shit was good???
i liked urs tho"
neva eva give said: "no i ai'nt gonna give it 2 u...we gotta get the votes....im jus sayin cuz im new n shit and im 14 by the way lol..and i dun no many black ppl but i jus spit and w/e happens..happens...i was jus wonderin if u really liked my stuff"
neva eva give said: "ill update that shit...i musta put it in wrong then"
NZA said: "tremor get this battle by far.....tremor had nice intro n outro....kinda fell off in the middle, bad flow in the middle also....
neva eva give....basiclly urs was just weak, its a battle, atleast put sum perosnals, in thur, ur whole things was basiclly fillers......weak weak weak...
vote: tremor"
CHINO said: "agrees with errbody else, Tremor took this in my view better flow and better punches all together it was the nicer verse so [B]VOTE: TREMOR[/B]"
Cotti said: "Yo Tremor gets Cotti's vote, his punchlines were better n Neva Eva was a decent verse but nuttin spectacular, so Tremor takes this one, n yo can yall come to my battle v. Madman n vote there please, thanks yalls"
Tremor said: "you wanna battle?
spit first.."
Tremor said: "makin fun of my name you must be retarded/
id make fun of your name, but dont know where to get started/
you talk a gun game, but your 15 yrs old/
break you arm if ya shot an eagle, and get shot left in the street cold/
but i dont see you with a gun, the only clip you got holds your celly/
and you so young, you start to cry if someone gave ya a pink belly/
id dont need a gun, and id still break you from your head to your toes/
beat your ass with my fist and maybe a rubber hoes/
your gilrs arent women, they be prost-a-tots/
i hope this battle doesnt upset you, put yer panties in a knot/
your takin about how you be smoking the dro/
upgrade that shit do a real drug, try some blow/
but your heads in a green cloud thinkin you can batte me/
3 votes to nil, i guess that win goes to me??/ haha"
Tremor said: "good stuff give, can we get some votes pls???"
Tremor said: "hey man, the way i look at it, anyone that is willing to post in here, and take criticsim like a man deserves props, but thats just me, and as you practice youll get better...so keep it up, but we need some votes...unless you wanna give me the win?? hhaha"
Tremor said: "haha ya we can get votes, but that was worht a try........14...well i just went by what was in your profile.."
Tremor said: "thanks for the vote latino......keep'em coming though boys....we get in the pit and make it happen for you guys when were here..so lets go"
Tremor said: "no man your good, i just didnt do the math haha, i just looked at 1990, and fed off that...."
Tremor said: "lets get some votes pls!!!"
Tremor said: "its my b-day...i guess he was just calling me a bithc or whatever so put a date into it, thanks for the vote don!!! keep'em coming, im up 2-0....and i think i got you on your battle latino,ill check again though"
Tremor said: "thats 3, thanks for the votes for who did vote!! much appreciated!! good job N-E-G"
Tremor said: "cheers chino!!! thanksfor the explantaion as well"
Tremor said: "thanks for the info nza...that the input we need to get better!!
cheers"
thadangerousdon9 said: "tremor .... i dont get whutz up wit feb 24"
Latino said: "TREMOR i Vote
More ......Rhyming andgood Punch Lines
can yall Vote on My one in teh PROVING GROUND"
Latino said: "yall gona VOTE ON MY BATTLE ???"
