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Twisted Illusion V.S. Tremor

Twisted Illusion said: "Yo dawg here it is. Rules No limit on lines first to 3 votes best out of 3 rounds"

Twisted Illusion said: "Ite dawg, i will make sure i on later hopefully."

Twisted Illusion said: "Understood, but the lines lets make it no more than 13 that ite"

Twisted Illusion said: "Well, i just got done wit 20 lines bit ago, i think that too many so lines."

Twisted Illusion said: "15 lins max First to 5 votes"

Twisted Illusion said: "ill post mine now cause i won't be on later. Tremor is like an earthquake but all you do is stutter and shake When you rap it is only poetry Im not tryin to commit bigotry If i am let me know and ill put on a show Just remember Twisted illusions when you rappin Cause ill tap ur girl while you happenin"

HECTIK said: "My Vote Goes To Tremor Cause Twisted Shit Was Weak Son And Tremor Stomped On Him. Vote - Tremor"

TheEmperor said: "[B]Tremor won[/B]. Twisted you should try reciting your rap out loud when u finish each bar. Keep at it, when u are battling try and pretend you are talking to the person. That will keep your rhymes natural and not forced. Plan out your 'conversation' then use synonyms to make your lines rhyme where u want. Remember the rhyme doesnt always have to come at the end of your line, try including rhymes in the beginning middle and end."

Jaybsty said: "Tremor killed him & I don't think he was even trying. Tremor gets my vote for sure."

Tremor said: "twisted..youj gonna be on later, i just got off work and gotta clean myself up and shit, so if ya wanna post later (at the same time that is)...that way its fair for both of us??"

Tremor said: "one thing with the rules though, 1 verse. 10-15 bars?? just one round, winner takes it....if we do it to big, no one votes cuz they dont wanna put the effort into in...and if your not on tonite at the same time as me now worries, the thread wont disappear..so when we battle we battle cool???"

Tremor said: "13 lines or bars??? 13 bars being 26 lines"

Tremor said: "ok....well im off right now, so lay down the amount of lines.... 1 verse, 1 round nither of us are in crews (no crew votes anyways) and you can pick lines, ill see whats up later... cheers!!"

Tremor said: "you think you can win, youve got a "twisted illusion"/ Tremor wins this battle, thats the only conclusion/ i could write something better, but dont wanna cause mass confusion/ so ill write just enough, 3-0 for Tremor, a wins the solution/ 15 line limit and you came up with 8/ it shows your a rookie, my games so far away its like im in a different state/ give me a second to gather myself, you verse mad me nauseas/ im still in the PG's, should be in the spit pit with the bosses/ you cant total my wins even if you add up all your losses/ and just to rub it in, ill show you my ass, like the packers saw randy moss's/ so you cant bet a shiney penny or your bottom dollar/ that when the votes come in, its Tremor they hollar!!? "so you cant BETTER a shiney penny or your bottom dollar" changed to due to spelling error to make sense "so you can BET a shiney penny or your bottom dollar""

Tremor said: "can we get some votes pls??"

Tremor said: "come on now fellas lets get some votes pls...it only takes a couple cheers"

Tremor said: "[QUOTE=Tremor]come on now fellas lets get some votes pls...it only takes a couple cheers[/QUOTE] do i have to ask?? come on boys"

Tremor said: "cheers hecktik for the stop by as well as the vote...1-0...can we get some more pls??"

Tremor said: "2-0...cheers on the vote fame, but his was weak on you too, someone should teach him...."

Tremor said: "Vote Vote Vote!!!"

Tremor said: "3-0....we need at least 2voters pls....so come on and vote!!"

Tremor said: "voters pls!!!?????!!!"

Tremor said: "thats 5-0....thanks for the votes and the battle twitsed...keep working on it, and take the advice that is giving to you cuz every little bit you get always helps (not just you but everyone). so keep working on it!! cheers boys"

~Fame~ said: "sorry twist you my boy but tremor crushed your weak rhyme come on dog you can do better ima have to teach you to rhyme. [SIZE=3][U][I][B]tremor hands down[/B][/I][/U][/SIZE]"

~Fame~ said: "ya we boys and i told him about this site and to check it out at least hes tryin hey tremor you wanna battle me?kicks or whatever i prefer it count though you know"

Latino said: "tREMOR GETS MY vOTE"