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CHINO said: "not really feelin this, was a bit too simplistic some of the rhymes seem forced..thats about all I can say about it, I've seen you do better..."

Jaybsty said: "[QUOTE=Krucial][CENTER]TREMOR/STRAPPD this fake~faggot acts hard,fallin off on OM's-make~patience,(ya too fast) say i only talk guns,but each lines diffrent-so dat s a hate~statement. [B]weak, first line was just filler so the multis connected[/B] ya facts~need~straightnin,a Kanuck who prolly masterbates~in~urinals, dont like me,cuz his dick gets hard 2 an overexagerated~personal. [B]weak again, multis just for the hell of it, masterbates in a urinal? why? most people masterbate in private, but maybe you know from experience?[/B] ya lyrics lowerin~a~level,hated me cuz me he was never holdin~on~a~metal, ugly loser,him n strappd fuck with there hands,still on da oldest fundamental. --he is strapped,jackin off 2 ya computer is gittin old if u like 30-- [B]really poorly worded second line, concentrating too much on multis again for the hell of it. the hated for holdin maetal line is true but how is that an insult?[/B] u just mad cuz im deep~in~my~set,in da hood i got atleast`sum~respect, how u critisize others wen u virtues n beliefs~4~da~net. --ask Truth-- [B]so you in the hood? how is this an insult? it's bragging...poorly worded second line too, dunno what they teach you kids in school these days, bairly makes sense, but I get what ya mean.[/B] lyrically smackin~dis~kid,this hypocrit is ackin~2~big,(u aint hard) the steroid u popped prolly got u light headed,n made u crash~in~ya~whip. --erbody knows he got in a accident-- [B]since when has tremor acted big? cause he shits in your pillow constantly? I'm confused :confused: And the steroid thing is too obvious not much thought put in here. tried to use the crash thing but coulda used it a lot better than that.[/B] against 4 bein hood,says my versus r ignorant~non~sense, preaches 'no freepost',but freeposts wit no-important~comments.(just shuddup) [B]started off decent about the ignorant nonsense, expected the second line to be defending yourself that you don't spit ignorant nonsense but I guess not :confused:. Second line was proly best of the drop[/B] tremor-lyrics l' impale~u,steroid users-no tellin wut they'll~do, if we ever boxed,u better hope that muscle enhancement dont fail~u.(dont kill yaself) [B]so you saying you can beat him in a fight thats never gonna happen? gee, great punchline, personals on fiya here!!!![/B] u use wack personals,so now u veiwed as da way~best, he's racist if u ask me,opposite of hood-no wunder he loves kanye~west.(ooh) [B]so you saying he's viewed as the the best? :confused: how's that an insult? and the kanye line was a good idea but not insulting again, multis very forced here[/B] if ya muscles r real-ya jail bait,now u must refrain~from~all~the~dicks, dis square talks shit,but if he was in my block-he'll remain~annonnamys.(quiet!) [B]multis very forced again, and more talk of you beating him up? pffft, great punchline again...lol[/B] TREVOR!-watch candyman,n notice how i gashed~yo~ass, hes so soft cuz him sledge n jay b ass~2~ass. --in candyman,trevor(da main girls man) got killd-- [B]Candyman thing is actually good cause tremor's name is trevor, thanks for the mention in the second line, dunno what the hell it's meant to mean, lamest homo punchline i seen in a while[/B] cmon man u on~drugs,no nothin bout da hood-but speak on~thugs, if hhw was real life,i'd think dat u want~slugs.(pop) [B]when did tremor speak on thugs? when he said they're lame? ok w/e, more gun talk, damn up your game son[/B] created strapped 2 poke fun~at~my~image,u talk guns~from~a~distance, no1 wanna hear yo 2 cents,just shut~up~4`instance. [B]pretty good bar, but not really an insult, cause he didn't create strapp'd to poke fun @ you, he did it to poke fun @ all the lame people like you!!![/B] last line reason wit u?-y bother~-1st~ill~pop~this~dude, n put "holes(hoes) in ya jeans(genes)" like "fathers~birthin~prostitutes".(daamn) --get it?holes in ya jeans(shot up)/hoes in ya genes.cmon now [B]you gonna pop him again? damn you like ya guns, must be a regular jesse james with all that shooting you do...second line was pretty good.[/B] u finished [B]^^^ far from it try again[/B] just shut da fuck up [B]^^^ no you shut the fuck up herb[/B] [/CENTER][/QUOTE] Enjoy the constructive feedback!!!"

Tremor said: "[QUOTE=Krucial]say da multies wit sum swag n see how they sound i went more 4 personals uppin[/QUOTE] honestly, why do you ask for feedback, when you constantly tell ppl what to think about your drops? i dont get that part??"

Tremor said: "[QUOTE=MOB]cheeeea. my bro krucial serve hom these tight lyrics. shut this stroide freak up[/QUOTE] this was pretty weak to be honset..the best you really had was steroids and some lame jerk off jokes..multies were ok, usually thats your strongest part, but this time they seemed really forced. and you do only talk about guns...it dont matter how each line is worded...its still about guns..steroids are a really weak personal as well..ive said many times (as well as the pic) how big i am. nad im 6'1 215..so by no means is that big for my height. so you really shouldnt fabricate personals... putting ~this~between~words~doesnt~make~them~mulites~.........other htan that, you could do better, and you wont get a response for this effort...everyones got at your crew, and its been dismantled...the shots would just be to easy... now i cant say the same when jay and sledge see the little pop shot you took at them... cheers"

sledge said: "erm...it was ok really really really bad use of what could be very good personal material..damn i could key 10 bars on trem right now..lol..;) ... u came so simplistic with this..wheres the wordplay and shit, the complexity, u got multis..but again they got too many lil ass words and shit in em, ya punches which are normally quite good at times were basic, lackin..lackin err punch basically..lol maybe u should stick to the gunplay...lol pce"

/|Tha Alchemist|\ said: "[QUOTE=Krucial][CENTER]TREMOR/STRAPPD this fake~faggot acts hard,fallin off on OM's-make~patience,(ya too fast) say i only talk guns,but each lines diffrent-so dat s a hate~statement. ya facts~need~straightnin,a Kanuck who prolly masterbates~in~urinals, dont like me,cuz his dick gets hard 2 an overexagerated~personal. ya lyrics lowerin~a~level,hated me cuz me he was never holdin~on~a~metal, ugly loser,him n strappd fuck with there hands,still on da oldest fundamental. --he is strapped,jackin off 2 ya computer is gittin old if u like 30-- u just mad cuz im deep~in~my~set,in da hood i got atleast`sum~respect, how u critisize others wen u virtues n beliefs~4~da~net. --ask Truth-- lyrically smackin~dis~kid,this hypocrit is ackin~2~big,(u aint hard) the steroid u popped prolly got u light headed,n made u crash~in~ya~whip. --erbody knows he got in a accident-- against 4 bein hood,says my versus r ignorant~non~sense, preaches 'no freepost',but freeposts wit no-important~comments.(just shuddup) tremor-lyrics l' impale~u,steroid users-no tellin wut they'll~do, if we ever boxed,u better hope that muscle enhancement dont fail~u.(dont kill yaself) u use wack personals,so now u veiwed as da way~best, he's racist if u ask me,opposite of hood-no wunder he loves kanye~west.(ooh) if ya muscles r real-ya jail bait,now u must refrain~from~all~the~dicks, dis square talks shit,but if he was in my block-he'll remain~annonnamys.(quiet!) TREVOR!-watch candyman,n notice how i gashed~yo~ass, hes so soft cuz him sledge n jay b ass~2~ass. --in candyman,trevor(da main girls man) got killd-- cmon man u on~drugs,no nothin bout da hood-but speak on~thugs, if hhw was real life,i'd think dat u want~slugs.(pop) created strapped 2 poke fun~at~my~image,u talk guns~from~a~distance, no1 wanna hear yo 2 cents,just shut~up~4`instance. last line reason wit u?-y bother~-1st~ill~pop~this~dude, n put "holes(hoes) in ya jeans(genes)" like "fathers~birthin~prostitutes".(daamn) --get it?holes in ya jeans(shot up)/hoes in ya genes.cmon now u finished just shut da fuck up[/CENTER][/QUOTE] [b]...ha........[/b]"

Krucial said: "^^^lol^^^ man i just sed wut i felt uppin"

Krucial said: "explain: this fake~faggot acts hard,fallin off on OM's-make~patience,(ya too fast) say i only talk guns,but each lines diffrent-so dat s a hate~statement. -his om's r gittin weaker,u gotta make patience,not rush em out,well u can,but.../n all my gun lines hav totally diffrent punches 2 em n he constantly says do a new thing,i have diffrent punches too,n my gun lines r all diffrent- ya facts~need~straightnin,a Kanuck who prolly masterbates~in~urinals, dont like me,cuz his dick gets hard 2 an overexagerated~personal. -im usa,hes canada,i dont kno wut canadians do,they prolly do do crazy shit like dat/he duz love personals 2 death,wen i dont hav enuff,my shit sucks i guess- ya lyrics lowerin~a~level,hated me cuz me he was never holdin~on~a~metal, ugly loser,him n strappd fuck with there hands,still on da oldest fundamental. --he is strapped,jackin off 2 ya computer is gittin old if u like 30-- -computer jackin off thing- u just mad cuz im deep~in~my~set,in da hood i got atleast`sum~respect, how u critisize others wen u virtues n beliefs~4~da~net. --ask Truth-- -ask truth- lyrically smackin~dis~kid,this hypocrit is ackin~2~big,(u aint hard) the steroid u popped prolly got u light headed,n made u crash~in~ya~whip. --erbody knows he got in a accident-- -n he duz act hard, n he is a hypocrit how he talks bout no freepostin- against 4 bein hood,says my versus r ignorant~non~sense, preaches 'no freepost',but freeposts wit no-important~comments.(just shuddup) -he looks down on hood rappers- tremor-lyrics l' impale~u,steroid users-no tellin wut they'll~do, if we ever boxed,u better hope that muscle enhancement dont fail~u.(dont kill yaself) -lol- u use wack personals,so now u veiwed as da way~best, he's racist if u ask me,opposite of hood-no wunder he loves kanye~west.(ooh) -mnost rappers rap cuz in da hood aint really nuttin else but dancin n sellin drugs n shit,n kanye aint that- if ya muscles r real-ya jail bait,now u must refrain~from~all~the~dicks, dis square talks shit,but if he was in my block-he'll remain~annonnamys.(quiet!) -true,true- TREVOR!-watch candyman,n notice how i gashed~yo~ass, hes so soft cuz him sledge n jay b ass~2~ass. --in candyman,trevor(da main girls man) got killd-- -talkin shit- cmon man u on~drugs,no nothin bout da hood-but speak on~thugs, if hhw was real life,i'd think dat u want~slugs.(pop) -drugs=steroids/n if hhw was real life i'd prolly handle my biznis wit em 4 real,but this is da net only- created strapped 2 poke fun~at~my~image,u talk guns~from~a~distance, no1 wanna hear yo 2 cents,just shut~up~4`instance. -man u tlk 2 much fam- last line reason wit u?-y bother~-1st~ill~pop~this~dude, n put "holes(hoes) in ya jeans(genes)" like "fathers~birthin~prostitutes".(daamn) --get it?holes in ya jeans(shot up)/hoes in ya genes.cmon now"

Krucial said: "uppin this bullshit...................."

Krucial said: "dog shut yo gay ass up"

Krucial said: "just cuz i sed i tried personals? i'm wack oh well uppin"

Krucial said: "gay da multies wit sum swag n see how they suck i went more 4 personals uppin"

Krucial said: "uppin this"

Krucial said: "[CENTER]TREMOR/STRAPPD this fake~faggot acts hard,fallin off on OM's-make~patience,(ya too fast) say i only talk guns,but each lines diffrent-so dat s a hate~statement. ya facts~need~straightnin,a Kanuck who prolly masterbates~in~urinals, dont like me,cuz his dick gets hard 2 an overexagerated~personal. ya lyrics lowerin~a~level,hated me cuz me he was never holdin~on~a~metal, ugly loser,him n strappd fuck with there hands,still on da oldest fundamental. --he is strapped,jackin off 2 ya computer is gittin old if u like 30-- u just mad cuz im deep~in~my~set,in da hood i got atleast`sum~respect, how u critisize others wen u virtues n beliefs~4~da~net. --ask Truth-- lyrically smackin~dis~kid,this hypocrit is ackin~2~big,(u aint hard) the steroid u popped prolly got u light headed,n made u crash~in~ya~whip. --erbody knows he got in a accident-- against 4 bein hood,says my versus r ignorant~non~sense, preaches 'no freepost',but freeposts wit no-important~comments.(just shuddup) tremor-lyrics l' impale~u,steroid users-no tellin wut they'll~do, if we ever boxed,u better hope that muscle enhancement dont fail~u.(dont kill yaself) u use wack personals,so now u veiwed as da way~best, he's racist if u ask me,opposite of hood-no wunder he loves kanye~west.(ooh) if ya muscles r real-ya jail bait,now u must refrain~from~all~the~dicks, dis square talks shit,but if he was in my block-he'll remain~annonnamys.(quiet!) TREVOR!-watch candyman,n notice how i gashed~yo~ass, hes so soft cuz him sledge n jay b ass~2~ass. --in candyman,trevor(da main girls man) got killd-- cmon man u on~drugs,no nothin bout da hood-but speak on~thugs, if hhw was real life,i'd think dat u want~slugs.(pop) created strapped 2 poke fun~at~my~image,u talk guns~from~a~distance, no1 wanna hear yo 2 cents,just shut~up~4`instance. last line reason wit u?-y bother~-1st~ill~pop~this~dude, n put "holes(hoes) in ya jeans(genes)" like "fathers~birthin~prostitutes".(daamn) --get it?holes in ya jeans(shot up)/hoes in ya genes.cmon now u finished just shut da fuck up[/CENTER]"

MOB said: "cheeeea. nice shit tight verse"

-bulletproof~lyrics- said: "[QUOTE=Krucial] reason wit u?-y bother~-1st~ill~pop~this~dude, n put "holes(hoes) in ya jeans(genes)" like "fathers~birthin~prostitutes".(daamn) --get it?holes in ya jeans(shot up)/hoes in ya genes.cmon now [/QUOTE] [B]fav line^^^lol i got it,seen bettr from u but seen wrse[/B]"