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A lil HappinessA lil Happiness
Palmer said: "i gotta say... this is dope, flow is sick, beat is sick, if u had nice quality it would be dope! worst thing is i find it hard to understand ur accent at point, i really liked this, best track yet i think, ohhhh do u have canaries or budgies or sumthing?"
sparky said: "a new song i did...da chorus turned out wierd..........its hard to hear but other den dat its straight a lil change from da deep tracks im doin a very relax feelin to it
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[U]Lyrics[/U]
today da sunchines, no more runnin from nines,
blessed wit da peace...fo dis one tim,
no mo gats, crack, or macs,
chill on da stoop,
no worries fo whose out fo who,
no death hazards, peace and laughter
no ones greed is after,
just free from disaster,
A joyful day, nuttin spoils da day,
drama no bother,
every kid grows wit a mama and father,
Vacca only shots we see,
smille on da blocks and streets,
no glocks or heat, GAMES PLAYED,
where rich and poor live da same way,
a few slap ups, no mo jack ups, no gats ta back us,
Just relax uh, no doors ta lock,
where wars forgot, no stores ta rob,
cap off da hydrant, water sprays,
no1's defiant, no harder days
[U]
ChorusX2[/U]
prey fo a, prey fo a....
prey fo a day like dis
beautiful wit da sun gliss,
a day of eternity,
greed money aint a concern ta me,
A lil bit of....a lil bit of...a lil bit of happiness
[U]
Verse 2[/U]
smille wit faces, no murder trials or cases,
survival or graces, no revival or racist,
a day free from suffer, Mcees no hustler,
Strength we mustard,
beuty in its finest, blings we shine it,
no jealousy, no crack ta sell ta gees,
feel dat, face felt da breeze,
a day of memories, no cops ta censor me,
just let it be, a day ta chill,
away from kills,
A new course, a few smiles, a few remorse,
stare ova da pier, whiskey treat wit cheers,
sweet ta ears, love defeat da fears,
red be wit blue, paddys ready fo da BBQ,
let da joy free from u,
kids chill play on curbs,
a day we cant explain in werds,
no racial shit, just lace ya kicks,
chill back away from clips,
a day of angels, no death drugs a changed flow...
[U]CHORUS[/U]
X2
[U]Verse 3[/U]
love of da streetness, deepness,
i speaks kids,
its true, a day dats perfect,
love revovling like da earth is,
no gang signs, a couple slang lines,
as we change rhymes
A day fo photos, where familys hav NO no shows,
Adults Chill, Kids runnin,
type shit every1 is lovin,
A lil b-ball, outta acontrol,
type shit dat frees da soul,
Dis day sticks in minds, happiest moment,
youd pick this time, shil spit some rhymes,
rellax sniff some lines,
A day only da lucky see,
da day da dutchys sweet, dis day is touchin me,
no cheddar mucrkin, baretta hurtin,
a day dat make u a better person,
where unity shown threw da community,
is fluently,
SHOWN,
a day dat grants deeds must understand me,
dis is a day every man needs
lol i gotta go i finish da lyrics when i get ta my pops house..........."
sparky said: "ya i gots birds.......2 of em dey cost like $80......dey expensive.......and annoyin.....lol"
sparky said: "yea chorus got FF^ fo some reason"
sparky said: "bump fo feed"
sparky said: "thx fo feed homies.......yea im from NY and got a wierd accent from it........i dunno ill try and work on it if i can lol"
sparky said: "Bump fo mo feed.............."
phyphe said: "i could hear the birds in the BG lol, and i thought they went good with the song cuz u talkin about a beautiful day...
this is a nice track, like you said, juss to chill back on...i was feelin it the whole way through...
your flow is good, could be perfected, but your style is unique, so i like that...
the hook was a lil weird but it worked imo...
overall nice shit, keep it comin dude, its becomin easy for u now"
Prophet Illadelph said: "This is a pretty dope drop. Liked it. Good flow, delivery is ok, sometimes find it hard to understand wat u saying... but overall a really good drop. Props."
EyeCue said: "[I]Yea, this is one of the best tracks i've heard on this site in a while. Flow was damn good (you have improved on it dramatically). I liked the beat, and the lyric's were pretty good. They were'nt the most complex, but they were good for this track. Good shit. Keep improving.[/I]"
Bounty Hunta said: "ur flow was good...the lyrics r good, i really enjoy'd read'n em lol...the beat is good...if ur voice was a lil louder it would of been better cuz its hard to hear u..but otherwise it was really good...o/a a GREAT piece"
Alpha&Omega said: "[I]lyrics are good, flow is too, the message was deep..but the quality sucks and ya accent is kinda ehh...but good shit..the multies were evident also.[/I]"
