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Heartbreaker ENT. pt 2

313 Mizik said: "fuck u nigga atleast in the mid-west we aint writin poems little ho ass shit talkin bitch why ask for feed n say fuck you to the peoplations that said its wack...u cant handle that?....soft ass nigga go write another poem"

Ely said: "this is hot... nice vocabulary n nice overall message ( ^^^^too bad that some people that havent even posted a piece in here with brains too small 2 even appreciate nice poems feel tempted to make stupid comments^^^^ although i aint talking of u jamaica something lol) Fave lines: [I]and so quick I steal your heart with my romantic thesis at chase for lifted wing tips, she hopes I sing this I hope this princess is happy with ugly speach and cd skips[/I]"

Ely said: "yeah u are stupid so i'ma shut up right now with the free-post n so should u... n when u drop meaningfull shit than u cant talk shit until than u just Shut the fuck up!! n let intelligent people drop intelligent feed n what didnt u like in this piece? U cant even break it down at categories... Just resign urself to ur stupidity"

gorillaREN said: "I be loving your word play and imagery you always come nice with that sometimes you over do it but it flowed nicely this time im really feelin your flow hot shit fam stay up"

micmerdah said: "This Was Some Hot Shyt Fams I Actually Took Time To Read The Entire Thing...Good Emotion"

xcluzive shortii said: "i know yall aint beefin' ova this dude piece right now lol..both yall jus calm down cuz that aint even wat its about...gettin bak to the topic...this was a nice piece a little confused wit the imagery but i thought it was hot..props -[xcluzive]-"

Daytuh? said: "thanx to the yey sayers... as for the ney sayer, you don't know ME so stop frontin... truth be told, I could care less about your mid-west ass, you wouldn't know good music if Hip Hop was born in your punk ass city."

Daytuh? said: "she sits on the tip of my poison tung with love sickness symtoms fickle, sipping missing elements from civil wisdom she like's to listen, I tell her exactly what she wants to hear aparently I'm the first in her war torn years give her flowers, the most morbid florist with flesh eating orchids constructing gardens to run through, puddle's are bloody gorgeous I'm waiting on hands made of feathers for her soft kiss, lips twist to single presence and I pick the pierced section for perminent residence trust the evidence, every second was benevolent and every breath was exempt from neglagence dialect danced lovely like beautiful floating pictures I think I see inside of her, the outer imagery is simalr plus I spend my nights pebble tappin glass boudries at the chance to whisper somethin sweet, shh don't speak... I'm living in old memories remembering everything pay no attention, heartbreaker ent. just life reflecting relationships filled with heavy laughter and happily ever afters sink in the disaster of fairy tale scripted satire but the punchlines keep commin, and I've heard em all infact I scribbled em with messy headings on my favorite wall my conversation is cheap, a couple cancer sticks and so quick I steal your heart with my romantic thesis at chase for lifted wing tips, she hopes I sing this I hope this princess is happy with ugly speach and cd skips heartbreaker ent. all emotions are makeshift in the end I'm alone and complacent she's adjacent to heaven in a self induced hell she begs to differ her situation help help help but I remember she struggled from slumber under summer stars and I subtly kissed all her depressed scars legs arms and heart and assume all fault ignite the last wickand dry her tears that fall"

Daytuh? said: "thanx fams.. I have pt 1 recorded and I am going to record pt 2 soon... this is the label I'm trying to get up and runnin... Hearbreaker ENT. it consists of the Boomdocs, my brother and Bricks, the Boonies, me and Bricks and then a few producers... we are looking to get a solo abum each this summer, the Heartbreaker lp, a Boonies album, and a Boomdocs album... all for free download at donothingsaynothing.com... there is already some stuf up.. I don't think I'm up there yet.. but bricks is, and that's one of my producers label's he is trying to start.. so check it in the future."

Daytuh? said: "motha fuck you son... because you know what, I'd rather write a poem that has worth than some fake ass gangsta bravado shit, so fuck off... and poems arn't all I do... you wanna battle kid, I'll rip your face off and feed it to your dog, oh wait that's ya guhl..."

Deliz-Jamaica said: "Whatever yaw iz weak !"

Deliz-Jamaica said: "ey yaw..im with stupid im the only one whose thinking this topic is weak you talking poop right now"

Deliz-Jamaica said: "check it thats what im talking about You dont know me so stop frontin"