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RippTheDon said: "That was cool, I BE snapping my fingers, lol, keep it up"
mc andre said: "Do you feel like the sunshine. God bless you"
Ely said: "It's cool there's 1 one line that in the context looked really good:"I be that man walking on sunshine"
Good stuff thought the begining was kind of strange cause i couldnt catch the flow of the poem"
micmerdah said: "[CENTER][I]I Be… [/I]
[I]Ya'll don't know who I be!![/I]
[I]That's impossible to know who I be!![/I]
[I]Only I know who I be!![/I]
[I]God Himself doesn't know who I be!![/I]
[I]U DON'T KNOW ME[/I]
[I]So let me enlighten you[/I]
[I]To who I be[/I]
[I]It'll only take a couple minutes of your time[/I]
[I]But these minutes are separate eternities[/I]
[I]I be the Book Of Revelations[/I]
[I]Read in Hebrew[/I]
[I]I be the sign of things to come[/I]
[I]I be the sign of things to come[/I]
[I]I be that tenacious character[/I]
[I]Hustler of the cornerstone[/I]
[I]Light of the darkness[/I]
[I]Repellent of hatred[/I]
[I]I Be[/I]
[I]I Be[/I]
[I]I Be[/I]
[I]I Be[/I]
[I]I be the dribble of the basketball[/I]
[I]With 5 seconds left on the shot clock[/I]
[I]Up and down I go, up and down I go[/I]
[I]The pressure mounts with every dribble[/I]
[I]I be 8 Mile blended with Carlito's Way[/I]
[I]I try to do right, I try to do right[/I]
[I]But they keep pulling me…[/I]
[I]Lord knows I try to do right[/I]
[I]I be that man walking on sunshine[/I]
[I]Who gives a shit for UV rays??[/I]
[I]The UV rays are only my way out[/I]
[I]For now I am blind to ignorance[/I]
[I]I be the all-great throne[/I]
[I]That enemies and foes throw rocks at[/I]
[I]In hopes and prayers that they chip the stone[/I]
[I]But I forever stand undaunted[/I]
[I]I be the bullet from a silencer rifle[/I]
[I]Right in the middle of the assassin and the target[/I]
[I]In freeze frame[/I]
[I]My life stops in milliseconds[/I]
[I]I be the whispers of a better life[/I]
[I]That be stuck to ears[/I]
[I]Though they are unvoiced whispers[/I]
[I]They steadily scream [/I]
[I]GET UP
GET OUT
GET DOWN[/I]
[I]GET IN[/I]
[I]I be that timeless classic[/I]
[I]I be that favorite greatest hits collection[/I]
[I]I be that song that taps your spine[/I]
[I]I be that Jackson 5 Christmas Album[/I]
[I]I be what made Michael return to win three more[/I]
[I]I be the love[/I]
[I]I be the joy[/I]
[I]I be the pride[/I]
[I]I be the urban rebellion[/I]
[I]I be the verbal rebellion[/I]
[I]I be the untapped resource[/I]
[I]I be[/I]
[I]I be[/I]
[I]I be[/I]
[I]I be[/I]
[I]I BE!![/I][/CENTER]"
micmerdah said: "Thnx Uppin For Feedback"
xcluzive shortii said: "this was a hot piece though i agree wit Ely it was hard to catch the flow of it...but regardless nice work props to ya
-[xcluzive]-"
Essential said: "This was Nice I can tell you a church boy which is good. nice vocabulary you should put this on audio keep up the good work."
syko said: "Something very funny and strange about this poem dog seriousely."
syko said: "Who you talking to?"
