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Do Ya Thang ft. 313 Mizik, J.MinDz, ErieDo Ya Thang ft. 313 Mizik, J.MinDz, Erie
313 Mizik said: "haha i peepd it a while ago i just aint respond - thanks fa the love erbody,"
313 Mizik said: "[QUOTE=Revelation]the beat was OK for a crunk beat, gets the point of what you tryin to do...
Mizik - Very very commercial, flow is pretty smoothe over this slower beat....your lyrics are very commercial like stated ([B]not sure if its so badd[/B]) but good solid verse...
Jae - Some words i notice are a little forced, the way the beat is, you tried putting the wrong emotion into them, cause they aint hitting as hard as they should....you know how to flow over the beat, but just make it sounds a lil better, and u'll b aight....
I was really feeling the hook, but it did its job i guess
overall it was aight imo, not my style really, too commercial for my taste, keep doin u[/QUOTE]
thanks fa the feed rev - of course commercial is good it gets ya moneys !!!! lol but ya good look on the feeds"
313 Mizik said: "niggas on here be stuck on the underground mad complex lyrical shit - it doesnt work out on beats to well - n definenetly dont work in clubs/the hood but yo thanks fa the feed syllable"
Jaybsty said: "ok listening...
we on some lil john shit @ the start here...
we on some club shit here...keep it clubbin, mizik nice start ya flow is nice on this, lyrics pretty nice, like how the beat stops and goes into acca, that sounds tight there. Killin every song I'm appearing in...fave line.
Chorus - not too bad, the ahhh errr or w/e that is doesnn't sound right, sounds like something outta one of those ATF kids audios...lol
verse 2 - you got a nice flow, lyrics fairly nice, lyrics could been stronger.
Chorus again - that aahhh err shit don't sound right..lol. But the hook I think jae's doing is pretty tight...
verse 3 - nice flow again, can't really fault it. wanna make the money thats what I'm about man...lol. nice ending.
ight, I aint a big fan of these sorta songs, but I can't really find many faults in this. Lyrics could been stronger but don't have to be. But take that ahhhhh err shit the chick is doing out. It's damn horrible...lol, just being honest."
RippTheDon said: "the song was aiight, hard to hear, but I was feeling you on that feestyle more, keep it up the beat was hot"
Palmer said: "crunky haha aint really the kind of style im feeling, dont feel these kinda beats, slow tempo
313 came pretty nice, flow was pretty nice, nice delivery and stuff, lyrics pretty cool, dunno what else to say, good stuff,
jae smalls, dont like the way u hold ur words to much on some lines, flows nice tho, levels seem right, lyrics alrite, u sound nice on the hook but i aint feeling that girl going ehhh, seems outta place, deliverys pretty cool tho just the holding words,
good shit, but as i said, not my kinda tune, keep at it, peace"
δφℓℓαbℓε δсίεηсε said: "313 showed a little potential in this one
Jae showed little potential.
Beat was a beat but not that great.
Just didnt come together as nice on this one, and the girl was all over the place im not sure why you went w/ that"
Qwestions said: "peepin now....
first off my bad on this man cuz i completely forgot about this but it came out nice as hell 313 had nice delivery on this shit lyrics was nice for this type of track nice nice
the hook i think it should have been the other way around cuz jae u was in the backround of the hook and shorty was louder shoulda have been switched then it wouldnt have been annoyin to me but i like the idea tho
yo verse is nice man the flow is on point all the way through nothin i can really say about it actually
second verse was nice i think it was better cuz u was jus bein real u kno i like that in ya son lol thats wass poppin keep at it peace"
Prophet Illadelph said: "First off, I see you on the commercial thing, that's cool do you. I mean I don't normally like these type of beats, but this actually got me noddin to it haha. The girl singing on the chorus is pretty bad offkey lol, that kinda threw me off, but you did pretty well in backing her up.
Both Jae's verses were pretty good flow wise, think you went off in a few places on ur 2nd verse, but nuttin too major. And you had good delivery too.
313 had a solid verse, flowed nice and had decent lyrics too, good shit though.
Both comfortable on the mic too. Yeah, good drop.. couldn't ever see myself doing suttin like this, so you got my respect on that.
Propz."
INterNAL said: "nice audio....313 was a bit loud....he needs to lower the volume of his vocals.... chorus could be a bit stronger....but very original.....jae ur verse was pretty sick...feelin the commerical appeal...simple lyrics that make it pop i was feelin it...could have been a bit louder and enthusiastic....3rd person had some good flow....lacked complexity...and sounded a bit weak....
all awround good audio"
JaeSmaLLz said: "this shit is a club banga.. hot.. this is the net/soundclick version.. cuz some of th quality is wack..
[B]but use headphones for the full force..[/B]
1st - 313 * 2nd - me * 3rd - me*
jmindz and erie on the chorus
jmay hot wit da beat.. and my nigga hot wit da mix..
[url]http://www.soundclick.com/jaesmallz305[/url]
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JaeSmaLLz said: "thanks 4 the love yall.. 313 peep this shit nigga.. where u at!?@?@?@??@?@
oh n about da chorus.. i kno.. we had to keep the vocals low cuz the effect my nigga did to them is nasty.. but itll excede the "only uploadin 10 megabytes" for soundclick so i just called it the net version.. lol.."
JaeSmaLLz said: "uppin this,,"
Revelation said: "the beat was OK for a crunk beat, gets the point of what you tryin to do...
Mizik - Very very commercial, flow is pretty smoothe over this slower beat....your lyrics are very commercial like stated (not sure if its so badd) but good solid verse...
Jae - Some words i notice are a little forced, the way the beat is, you tried putting the wrong emotion into them, cause they aint hitting as hard as they should....you know how to flow over the beat, but just make it sounds a lil better, and u'll b aight....
I was really feeling the hook, but it did its job i guess
overall it was aight imo, not my style really, too commercial for my taste, keep doin u"