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keepinittrill said: "shit was decent, nothing spectacular"
Ely said: "Really nice read i got to say it got better from
"The strangeness is strong enough to bring upon tears
Is something wrong here? My membrane filled wit strong fears"
Because i feel like when you write something like that it just brings the piece to another level and you cant go down from it no more i like this pieces where the person just takes a long time to describe like 1 second cause it shows the reality the cenary and everything so u did a great job that but than u had a really great closure to this subject that acctually makes me realise who was that woman "Years later I would reflect on the moment I met my mom" that was really deep and it gives even more dept(if that's how to spell it) to the piece
Great job
(We got to collab on something)"
MarQuee said: "Im crossing over the bridge into nothingness
Where nothing but light shows, the world glows
And with each one of my thoughts, it grows
My naked body cold, im lacking clothes
It was dark then my world changed, the action froze
The strangeness is strong enough to bring upon tears
Is something wrong here? My membrane filled wit strong fears
I feel a sharp pain in my arm as I try to remain calm
But the pain doesnt cease, instead it remains strong
Its a foreign world, as I remained curled
Up on the cold floor, I hear the voice of a girl
But its only a voice, I hear no words
Tears drenching my skin, Im so hurt
Then for the first time in what feels like hours
I feel warmth on my skin and I glance up to a woman appearing a tower
And in her arms for some reason Im calm
Years later I would reflect on the moment I met my mom"