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''so much fire''-me, Q&vybe pro''so much fire''-me, Q&vybe pro
Yung.ReD said: "this was a nice track.. fellin the beat.. everyone did thier thing.. fellin vybe the most.. but there was no stand out in this..everyone had there shines.. i like that.. good lyrics.. flow.. ect.. good overall track..
stay droppin dem tyte tracks fcm.."
TheEmperor said: "**Critiques**
AO, need a little more emotion, its all about the space in between the words more so than the words.
? same thing wit the emotion, I wanna hear you DESTROY the damn track. Cha kno, jus murder it and make niggaz say damn.
Vybe had the swagger wit it, no crit on his verse.
**My personal feeling of it overall**
Overall 7/10 feelin it, clean it up a lil and I can hear it on the radio ( not sayin you're commercial now dont get offended lol)"
VybePro said: "good lookin out on the collab fellaz.. i like how this sounds... stay up"
Qwestions said: "didnt know this was posted up and i jus heard Vybes verse this mornin real good shit Vybe IMO he did the best outta us 3 verse was jus nasty all around good shit and good looks on the feed niggys peace"
Mr Melody said: "yo A&O u got much better, some cool shit u did on this, flow was cool and lyrics were good too
Q: u did real nice on this... flow was sick... u gettin much better
vybe: sick as usual some tight multies at the start and flow was tight
overall: pretty sick track no one fell off and everyone did they thing on this...
keep it up"
Remedy said: "ao- wasnt feelin ya flow....dont like the silence inbetween bars....lyrics were coo...delivery was iight and emotion wasnt none,,,,nice try redone this could be nice
Q-nice flow didnt notice you fall off for a sec.....lyrics were coo as hell....delivery was nice.....just a lil more emotion
vybe-what can i say ill multies and tight flow just all around sick"
MOB said: "i thought q did really good on this track. he def improoving from the last time i heared em. same wit ao.....what else can i say.....vybes just vybe always bringing that raw shit....liked this peaice here. keep at it fellas"
Bounty Hunta said: "damn A/O..dis is ur best verse i heard..flow'd well, it was clear tha whole way thru..sum nice shyt
i lik'd tha hook w/ tha beat..nice
and Q, ehh....wat 2 say, flow was sikk..lyrics were..U can Dance 2 my Statements..emotion was iight, could use a lil work, but nuthin big
vybe, lyrically i think tha best verse...flow was sikk...damn
dis a hot song, imma vote hot, and than imma DL it n put it on my mp3, nice shyt yall"
Alpha&Omega said: "1st verse me...
2nd -Qwestions
3rd-vybe pro..
[url]http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=235341&songID=4319826[/url]"
Alpha&Omega said: "[I]thanks for the feed mob and red....[/I]"
Alpha&Omega said: "[I]^fasho vybe
good looks on the feed rev, emp. and melody.[/I]"
JaeSmaLLz said: "ya best verse yet ao.. stay up my nig.. just get more comfertable on the mic b' keep rappin..
the chorus.. i hate it.. but it aint my taste..
qwest - ill verse from first to end
vybe - ILL.. nuff said.. no crit 4 my nigga.. lyrics of the chain"
Revelation said: "^^Agree'd with Emp about a'O's emotion...too many words you can tell you just reading your lyrics, and emotion is key....otherwise your verse would be solid.....Qwsetions also needs a bit of emotion in his verse, also i think oyur flow on this track messed you up maybe try some shorter bars and less faster flow...Vybe had the nice emotion the other guys were lackin..but lyrically i think they were pretty much equal...nice track fellas"
Low said: "[B]Sick Beat
Alpha - Good try, his flow was mostly fell of some where...good lyrics, i see he upped his delivery on this, work on emotion very short verse..lol, good try IMO
Q - Flow was ill, delivery was nice, IMO Q killed this, lyrics were cool, was this a freestyle? seemed like it..lol well done tho.
Vybe - Dayum kid, u ripped up the track, delivery was ill, so was emotion & flow, lyrics went w/ beat nicely. no critisims really..
good track fellas[/B]"
V For Vendetta said: "[QUOTE=TheEmperor]**Critiques**
AO, need a little more emotion, its all about the space in between the words more so than the words.
? same thing wit the emotion, I wanna hear you DESTROY the damn track. Cha kno, jus murder it and make niggaz say damn.
Vybe had the swagger wit it, no crit on his verse.[/QUOTE]
[B][COLOR="Red"]
Co-sign dem's, nice collab[/COLOR][/B]"
