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Collaterall lyrics (W/ SPoken)

Stacks said: "Link doesnt work fam"

sledge said: "listening, starts a tiny bit off, settles in, like the beat, u ride it pretty well, lyrics are ok, could do with bn maybe abit clearer. second guy is tight, rides the beat really well. pretty nice track overall, props."

Palmer said: "i actually liked this man, first guy need bit of work with his flow but his pauses at the start seemed on point, seems mad orginal with his voice, cypress hill kinda sound, just need to be bit more confident and aggressive on the mic, second emcee has nice flow, reminds me a bit of unique, nice multis, only thing i disliked was it was pretty short, keep doing ya shit, peace"

MOB said: "this was pretty good. i liked both of ya verses. i thought the 2nd guy killed it tho. keep at it"

Paper_Soulja said: "[url]www.soundclick.com/devilsdiamond[/url] enjoy.."

Paper_Soulja said: "wordd im first homie spoken is 2nd"

Paper_Soulja said: "and much fuckin love to palmer for that feedback! uppin"

Paper_Soulja said: "[SIZE="5"][COLOR="black"]Paper_Soulja[/COLOR][/SIZE] Psykotic Souls!! We'll sell your Life to the Devil..just sign the Dotted Line Below.. I School em' on da Rhymes n Flows.. teachin Student's how ta Dot they i'z ya know? Time ta Show hatas how ta I-den-tify a Foe swollen Retina Eyes. that Glow..this Advice I Told .. is da best thing i'll eva Advise ya Bro.. This Guy don't take orders like a Cyborg Clone and i Light da Ganja Spliff.. time ta Realise.. Imma Pimp..ya'll funny like da Cosby Kids you'll amount to nothing like Poc-ket Lent, God I'm SicC me and Spoke runnin Con-ti-nets we Soun-din Slick, loud and clear like we Announcin It, stop the shit talkin like we locked ya lips We be Monst-er-ous... While half you gay fucks stackin crap like a pile of shit! Found da Ditch [SIZE="5"][COLOR="black"]Spoken [/COLOR][/SIZE] (chorus) Co-latteral team we wont battle ya fiends but we will Throw rappers the meaning of what it really means to wreck the mic they fought they silly team from left to right we Back with a vengeance while your fruity bars stayed locked up like a... fag with a sentence dont ask for redemption...i'm actually wasted on the pages to get...get... Rappers Amazed! Lookin' At the Man in the Frame Ferocious like a T-Rex Attacking its Prey Puttin Claws in ya dome, even Crackin' Ya Face if you Follow the clones we will have ya replaced spit the baddest with AIDS in our Vocals, Hope you Know we dope and prone to Result to choke you so you hope we wont do, hope we wont move This be the type of Shit Only Spoke Do To The...Top-of-the-limits I'm givin' Honorauble-Lyrics and if you Bitin'-the-kid he'll be puttin Shots-in-ya-fitted With everyBody-thats-in-it all prolly Showered-in-crimson See I'm - Soo Great, I'm doing Powerful-images That be Caught-by-the-vividness, Stoppin-this-lyricist? Better luck having fuckin' WALDO-enVision-this Go "Swallow my kids" ... Suc-Ceed the wrong way n' I'll have you tied, Breathin' Harder than Darth Vader you Gone Hater - Please Believe it I got more Tricks than Ron Jeremy's Penis Region I will leave you breathin' the Smokey Track You'll never compare to mine...every piece u Hold is wack So Tempted To Shatter Professionals With the Beats that be so nuts like u Slappin' ya Testicles I'll be the Bust on ya block... Kinda like Cam'ron... Cause all that i be saying's you gonna Suck it or not? theres the lyric's so u guys can read as we go! now uppin this"

Paper_Soulja said: "word good looks yo even tho thats not the song on thsi topic hehe"

Paper_Soulja said: "there u go try it again :)"

Revelation said: "i werent really feelin ya verse soulja...it seems like you forced yourself to flow on this...it just wasnt gettin that smoothe feelind ya know...try structurin out ya lyrics a bit better...second guy was aight also...he knows how to use multi's and all, just needs a bit more kick....stay up fellas"

MC Phate said: "This was prety good. Yung Red had a solid Free, no real flaws.. Nice flow. Paper needs more experience with the free. you had it goin but you just need to relax and flow to the beat, seemed just a lil nervous or sumtin. It was a decent joint.. keep doin it yall.. [B] -Phate[/B]"