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The Girl Who Cried


PoEtIcDivinity said: "I liked this. Telling the story of a unfortunate child and showing her pain. THis was nice. The astracts thing was different. Letting people know vocab. keep this up. and keep writing -1-"

-:-THa iiiNFaMOUS-:- said: "picture in your mind a girl at the age of 12 ina broken home with a savage family the girl's family never showed unity shes been ill-starred* since the start her mom and dad put her thru so much shit and to top it off she's also illiterate** so without an education life in the streets is what she's facin only thing she knows is her faith in god even tho she never been close to a church or the bible momz and popz fighting and all the screaming is makin her crying she runs to her room in tears and under the bed is where she's lying prays to the lord to save her from this ordeal*** or at least to make it go away she's cried so much that the tears drip into a puddle she hears the door slam then of a sudden her popz comez in swearin n destroyin nearly everything she screamz for help, he finds her and beats her,what a father this devilish son of a bitch then does the unspeakable he rapes his very own daughter, the man is nothing but evil she wuz left to shed tears for weeks to come her chances of survival in this crazed home were close to slim and none at times she could repress**** the tears this girl been brutalitized n depressed for years till she came to a point thats unreasonable she couldnt stand another minute of being treated like a jew***** She took her fathers gun from the basement went to her parents room and popped off a shot in the air they woke'd panic n terrified screaming please no the girl screaming at them n sayin that they neva once cared they abused her n neva even shed a lil bit of love on her sparkelin tears drip from her face she screams i hate you then turns the gun towards her forehead all ya heard wuz the guns shot the girl was dead parents wuz screamin still deep inside they didnt care that she died as they look down her face her eyes where lifeless yet still sheddin the tears from all the pain that wuz inflicted upon her from the previous years may there be a moment of peace for the girl who died she will forever be known as the girl who cried this is more like story tellin poetry i wuz expermentin so yea hope u like *=Unlucky **=not educated ***=disasterous times/expierences ****=Hold Back *****=Jews were treated like pieces of shit in the holocaust n died n tortured"

-:-THa iiiNFaMOUS-:- said: "can i get some feedback please...."
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