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PoEtIcDivinity said: "wow...I can't believe this has been slept on. THis was a great peice. Your imagery was great. You had some grammar errors that somewhat through me off in the beginning but over all good.
The light my mind knows, is the one of death.
he's been wanting for me sence day 1
But the light my heart knows, is the one of faith, hope
healing and love, I will reach for the light
I will reach for the warm light levitateing me to the star's
I love that part. Good write -1-"
WDB_TrE said: "I wrote this awhile ago, but what you guys think??
Push Away:
I dont belive anyone feels the way I do
I cant seem to find the way outta the dark..
Id rather exspress my cold feet in an image
then verbelizeing a lie for you
When They talk I listen, when i Talk there missin
I admit, I have sins on my chest, you say there my burnden
for not being christan....just close your eyes like mine
please listen, just try to in-vision
watch the ink spill off my pen as i illistrate my ambition
am I suposed to be locked away in a mind-state of ''why''
is this my prison? or is this just a pitch black maze
where i need to find my soul's key to release me from this dungeon
when i find a thread of hope i lose it
are these dreams playing a trick on me
At the end of the tunnel i wake, this keeps me wonderin
am I alive or awake, or am i sleepwalking
my minds are seperate, like summer and fall
one side is in fall, cuz my leaves constantly keep dropping
the other is in summer time
cuz she whispers in my ear the grass is greener on the other side
Im surrounded in a ocean of lies, created by me
It feels like my life is fadeing away
and reletives are waiting for me
Theres a dem light in my eye, as i lie motionless on the floor
It speaks to me like an old friend, saying please get up
but i cant handle any more.........
The light my mind knows, is the one of death.
he's been wanting for me sence day 1
But the light my heart knows, is the one of faith, hope
healing and love, I will reach for the light
I will reach for the warm light levitateing me to the star's"
WDB_TrE said: "thanks homie, any more feed"
