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Sniper vs ............Sniper vs ............
Sniper said: "Let the battle commence...
8-12bars
5 votes 3-0ko
drop ur verse first"
Topkuality said: "iight ill go...but ur a new-b, ur thread, so u go first...ill drop later on if u ain't go by then"
Sniper said: "nah lets bouf drop at the same time......ill give u 45minutes..."
Sniper said: "Your home dictionary contains remains of "bile" cos u "suck at text"/
You couldnt rhyme tight,Even if u were wrapping ur poems in "spandex"/
You wont never earn no "CAPITAL" from rapping cos ur a "casual-t"/
Stand against me, not even the golly green giant can Hand-ALL-Me/
My Vocabulury obscures minds ,cause i write sick "A-maze-in-text"/
Call me Pussy,i dont and wont "pet" TK won't be "phasing-vets"/
Like dogs eating ur homework excuse "half ur rhymes are bitten"/
From Recent Inspection, I suggest you scrap your verse and drop a prewitten/
Drop Re-writtens, u couldnt "hit the spot" if i was impotent asian/
Rhyme Evasion, like "neutures" you cant even "rise for the occasion"/
Theres more shit in this forum then a overpopulated single room captivity/
You Know-Sis(ter), How u killing-me when u Hand-bag(back) all ur artillery/
You "beta" explode "alpha" or resign cos trust me calvin u just got "de-klined"/
make this a handicap match,back to back and i could still "spinal tap" all 3 rhymes/
Ill take ur ventricle,twists it round your artery,pulls it back like "firing archery" son/
Leave you in "vein" by boiling the mix,dnt threat dat wos da cardiovascular warm-up/
Minus 2 bars to even the odds , but like making an omellette i still gota "beat u"/
"Cross-dressing" wont help cos u a "trans-parent pussy",everyone can see-thru-u/
Your just a waste(waist) like TK serendaded both sides of ur belt/
Your bars are disastourous ,comparison to "crayolas" because there just not "felt"/
~NEXT~
.::SNIPER::."
Topkuality said: "Sniper is gonna make me non-hyper cuz his verse nuthin but a stinky diaper/
U couldn’t ride the flow of waves if u were surfin or drivin a purple viper/
Either way u sniped 2 people, but u like to fuck yourself witta vowel/
Prob a I-O-U shyt that ordue, so now ill jus let u hold da bitta towel/
U’ve been reckoned to join a crew, fuck, dey been away, “long gone”/
Ur second in dis battle cuz u fuckin suck “belong in da section for a pawn”/
Wait, there ain’t one, u mine as well get lost or feel my “hardcore exhaust”/
U like playin wit ya self, but ya dildo on a shelf, dis bitch “adore 2 get tossed”/
Only way 2 get out of this battle is 2 snipe others, u already “hit two”/
So now u gotta pass the gun, n im never runnin out of ammo den I “slit you”/
Ain’t wastin a bullet on dis punk bitch, he junk rich, but got no wins “rollin in”/
I no vampires that will drink ya blood till DEM ENDZ while im “controlling gin”/
Dem Ends, ur tha “Stem of ya friends”, u can’t ride in a nice car like “Eminem Benz”/
U assume shyt when u battle, u learn nuthin new for a bitch that “condemns new trendz”/
He new 2 da game, why battle me in a situation when u uptight wit no beat/
I’ll make u wheat in da beat of second, n everything I do, won’t need a repeat/"
Sniper said: "Your home dictionary contains remains of "bile" cos u "suck at text"/
You couldnt rhyme tight,Even if u were wrapping ur poems in "spandex"/
You wont never earn no "CAPITAL" from rapping cos ur a "casual-t"/
Stand against me, not even the golly green giant can Hand-ALL-Me/
My Vocabulury obscures minds ,cause i write sick "A-maze-in-text"/
Call me Pussy,i dont and wont "pet" TK won't be "phasing-vets"/
Like dogs eating ur homework excuse "half ur rhymes are bitten"/
From Recent Inspection, I suggest you scrap your verse and drop a prewitten/
Drop Re-writtens, u couldnt "hit the spot" if i was impotent asian/
Rhyme Evasion, like "neutures" you cant even "rise for the occasion"/
Theres more shit in this forum then a overpopulated single room captivity/
You Know-Sis(ter), How u killing-me when u Hand-bag(back) all ur artillery/
You "beta" explode "alpha" or resign cos trust me calvin u just got "de-klined"/
make this a handicap match,back to back and i could still "spinal tap" all 3 rhymes/
Ill take ur ventricle,twists it round your artery,pulls it back like "firing archery" son/
Leave you in "vein" by boiling the mix,dnt threat dat wos da cardiovascular warm-up/
Minus 2 bars to even the odds , but like making an omellette i still gota "beat u"/
"Cross-dressing" wont help cos u a "trans-parent pussy",everyone can see-thru-u/
Your just a waste(waist) like TK serendaded both sides of ur belt/
Your bars are disastourous ,comparison to "crayolas" because there just not "felt"/
~NEXT~
.::SNIPER::."
Topkuality said: "iight vote up ppl...looks like u were forcin a lil bit there sniper, but nice verse...."
Topkuality said: "iight 0-1....vote up ppl"
Topkuality said: "iight 0-2 ta him...vote up...no offense 2 u, both of u r true battlers n voters...i jus wanna get a vet 2 vote iight....thanx for votin both of u tho :D"
NZA said: "pretty much cosign what "username" said...sniper was consistent with hsi pnches, while tk's kinda fell of toward the end
vote: sniper"
Sniper said: "aite das 3-0ko, thanx for voting nza, username, and don....nice battle topkuality"
thadangerousdon9 said: "TK, Yer my boy and all and ya, I'm in his crew but I vote fair regardless so I'ma say [B]Snypurr [/B] jus' came hardur period, especially with sick intro and outro.....Peace y'all"
Username: said: "nice battle guys
flow: topkuality
personal: topkuality
wordplay: sniper
punches: sniper (topkuality got a little weak with his poucnhes as the verse went on imo)
creativty: sniper...all dat crayola, felt, beat alhpa shit was creative...
overall im gonna have to go with this dude sniper...i found his verse more enjoyable...and damn snipe for a newb u got good mulit rhyming skills"