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Illegitimate said: "Cosign Young, I was diggin the first bar, on the real. Nice use of vocab and multis."
NaplesPoet said: "Yo i got the fundamentals its kinda funny im going mental<>
I got the Essentials,crudentals and Potental kinda crazy im UnHelpfull<>
Shells hitting the ground from the 4pound when u hear the sound u leave the town n run for help<>
I dont know what im doing i dont understand my self<>
Cut ya up make a killa plaq put it on my Shelf<>
IM self made the bullet wont just graze<>
I just got done Puffin purple haze<>
IM in a Daze i stay caked<>
Im selling Weight like hot cakes<>
Never make a mistake fuck the Jakes(cops)<>
Im upping the stakes<>
Find me in a Restaurant Munching on Porter house stake<>
I c u dirty grimey mufuckas with ur hair falling out white Flakes<>
What i want i take<>
Come on dude dont hate<>
Im from Ny State<>
State of Libery state of mind everone from here stays on the grind on time n stake ur claim im never ashamed ill never leave i will always stay<>
Its a new Day<>
Bringgin heat like Dre in Cal-a-forn-i-a<>
Shit remind me of the days of nwa<>
Mufuckas getting Lyrically Slayed<>"
NaplesPoet said: "Werd good look on the feedback"
UGLM said: "good shit homie, the only line i didnt like was the 3rd one, but good, homie. peace
~wun~"
UGLM said: "Hey young and illegitimate, can yall vote in my battle wiv lyrikal murder in tha pit? peace...
~wun~"
Buck said: "Flowed good and started real promising but the Vocab and creativity dropped towards the middle and end.
Good to see you back by the way."
Melo said: "Lol, good shit Naples seein as im on ya team now i thought id give ya some decent feed. U started very well, but slid towards the end, but all around it was pretty good :cool:"
