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2 ma niggaz dat died2 ma niggaz dat died
gunit101 said: "dis goes out to ma niggaz dat died
wish u woz here evrytime i think ov u i just wana cry
why so many mudafukaz tellin so many liez
just sit down, look around, and open ur eyes
y u doin dat gun fight
bein on d run all nyt
but 1 day wa if day myt, catch up,
put dar gun up, u b lik wa da fuk,
shit goin through ur head
wishin u neva got up from bed
but now u lyin dar dead,
another o ma homiez gon,
i told u, u was in da wrong,
but u just carried on
now its 2 late ur gon!"
gunit101 said: "ight propz on tha feedbk still!"
Rydin2low said: "its just too basic man. Its like...listenin to a 50cent song. The lyrics is just simple. They ryhme and go together good and shit but its almost like rhymin cat, bat, hat...and so on. Work on your wordplay and methiphors...(kuz you had none)
on the real though i do give you big ups for;
"why so many mudafukaz tellin so many liez
just sit down, look around, and open ur eyes"
thats a hot line son."
Tha Rula said: "okay really, I wanted to say some good shit about this......but I find it so hard.
there's nothing really wrong with thi, but there's nothing really right either. work on ya multies and get into specifics, make it a street tale wit details that way we can all lock into it."
