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AfterMath05 said: "I'm new to this site and song writting.. these are the first two full songs i've written. Your thoughts will be appriciated. These songs are more R&B then rap but oh well. ------------------------------------------------------ Song Name: All I Want Is You [Verse 1] (Ooooo Yeah) Girl I love you But i don't know what you feel about me This is why i keep all my feelings inside Maybe we could share just one night later in time I would hold you so tight, Shower you with kisses & when the night is over, I hope you would miss this But when I think about the things i will never beable to share with you, I instantly sigh, Fall to my knees then breakdown & begin to.. cryyyyyy [Chorus] I seen you get hurt times and times again I always get stuck as the sholder you use for cryin', I don't mind cuz it brings me closer and closer to you But you should beable to see through playa's games by now They just lookin' for a pussy to do The utopia your lookin' for is found in my arms Babe... all I want is you. [Verse 2] When you first stepped into the club I thought to myself that was the most beautiful thing I ever seen. From that moment on i finally knew what true love means Then as we became closer, We spent more time together You are now the only thing on my mind & as new year approches I become more lifeless as the loneliness eats away at my soul Got no money still stuck on the friggin dole All i have is the contract on my heart that's still waiting for you to sign. I know expressing these feelings would be the wrong thing to do So I'll keep that wish list in my pocket that reads Babe... All i want is you [Chorus] I seen you get hurt times and times again I always get stuck as the sholder you use for cryin', I don't mind cuz it brings me closer and closer to you But you should beable to see through playa's games by now They just lookin' for a pussy to do The utopia your lookin' for is found in my arms Babe... all I want is you. [Spoken] Man this girl is so special. I just wish other guys would see this instead of purely focusing on her looks. This one... this one right here im writting for her... for her only. [Rap] Damn she looks so fine If i had one wish it would be for her to be mine Sippin on wine Slow dancing by candle light Then lay her down For the 5 minute round Have her making that moaning sound But this would be more then a night of extasy, It would be filled entirely of L.O.V.E [Chorus] I seen you get hurt times and times again I always get stuck as the sholder you use for cryin', I don't mind cuz it brings me closer and closer to you But you should beable to see through playa's games by now They just lookin' for a pussy to do The utopia your lookin' for is found in my arms Babe... all I want is you. [Repeat chorus to fade] ------------------------------------------------------------ Song Name: Don't Want You In My Life [Verse 1] I met alot of chicks But never any like you You said we would be together forever And since you met me your life seemed so much betta I gave you all my affection It was a hard job but I did it to perfection And when things got tough, you were my inspiration So when I said I love you & you replied with I love you too Was this the truth or apart of my imagination The answer came one day When i came home & found you in bed with another man You told me it didnt mean a thing But the pain was too much for me The truth was finally able to be seen I said "pack your bags you stupid whore Cos I'm sorry but I just dont love you no more" [Chorus] I really thought you were the one to be my wife But now I don't want you in my life I gave you my heart, along with the key But then I found out the things you done to me [Verse 2] I thought me & you had something strong All thats left now is a heart that's torn Sometimes i wish i never found out what was really goin' on You should of known it would cause me this much pain You never should of wasted yours and my time I wanted to grow old with you by my side But now im coping just fine without you in my life [Chorus] I really thought you were the one to be my wife But now I don't want you in my life I gave you my heart, along with the key But then I found out the things you done to me [Rap] I was a fool for lovin' you the first time I'm not taking the chance of it happenin' again If we continued our love it just wouldn't be the same So keep your lies Save your alibies Say your goodbyes Then get out of my life Cos I was a good man Always did the best I can Stayed faithfull 100 percent of the time Never thought without you in my life i would be doin' just fine Now you are no longer my world And I aint missin' you at all [Chorus] I really thought you were the one to be my wife But now I don't want you in my life I gave you my heart, along with the key But then I found out the things you done to me [Repeat chorus to fade]"