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...:::r.e.s.p.e.c.t--(first Poem Ever):::.......:::r.e.s.p.e.c.t--(first Poem Ever):::....
NZA said: "expand upon this...realli good idea, nice flow, and thinkin involved"
AR-15 said: "I like it very nice and deep even tho it didnt rhyme it still made since yea common scence lol but yeah keep it up and you would get betta ca"
smoker420 said: "i liked it...i like the violent turn at the end"
Stacks said: "[B]People ask one question and one question only
why do we kill our selves, our youth and our own familys?
ill give you an answer...its because we kill to survive these tragic streets
the heart, the beat, the front row seats of the ghetto
so many ways that we can live in peace
but we chose not to, basically for respect in the streets
i give respect when its do but not when i dont recieve it
so if you feel like i aint done shit..and do not deserve to be here
then i guess point the gun to my face, but till then...my time is near!![/B]
[I][B]Tell me what you think..[/B][/I]"
CHINO said: "gotta go with tha nizzla on this on..lol..shit was nice, good idea should be longer other than that it's a good poem..."
CHINO said: "[quote=SixxChaat]It was okay, didnt really rhyme but I could see the potential. You should try and replace your words so that they dont always repeat. You should also try to make your lines shorter because if they are too long it becomes streched .
Keep it up!
Peace[/quote]
not all poetry has to rhyme;)"
sledge said: "this was aiight for a first poem it was good, u need less lil words and more imagery and ish, i liked the line about, the heart, the beat...shoulda developed it more tho'..maybe made that the central theme of your drop, the ~"pulse" of the street kinda thing..
pce"
Buck said: "Ye needs to be longer nice piece still.......I never knew bout this FLOETRY SECTION...."
xcluzive shortii said: "i liked this alot...but like they said you should make it longer. there's mad places you could go wit that subject...jus play around n ce if you could take it further..props tho i did like it
-[xcluizve]-"
Redhotchilichic said: "This was pretty good for a first poem........."
SixxChaat said: "It was okay, didnt really rhyme but I could see the potential. You should try and replace your words so that they dont always repeat. You should also try to make your lines shorter because if they are too long it becomes streched .
Keep it up!
Peace"
SixxChaat said: "But it's better if it does tho. Cuz people get into it better."
